Loved this. As for the very end, all I could think when I read it was:

"College for five kids won't be cheap."
"We're having three."
From W13 episode Duped, that Niall and Erica guest starred in. :)

Keep up the great work.

Very good story! And i read the one about the wolves too, that was a very good story as well! Your stories shoe that you have a lot of talent!

Great story!

Okay, that little Doctor Who reference right there made me love these stories even more than I already do. xD What's better is that it'd be so like Zane to make a Doctor Who reference. xD

I love it! Seriously the best Zane/Jo I've read.

Beautiful, and, like many of your fics, left me smiling. I'm rapidly making my way through all of them, so I'm hoping season 4.5 continues to inspire you! Thank you for such lovely work.

Just a real quick note: the explanation of BOUS bats of unusual size literally made me choke on my food. I love it and am hard pressed to put this story down.

(gasps in place of laughter) Some people consider bats to be a type of rodent you know... (grins) "The Princess Bride," was a funny movie but the plot stunk big time.

-jwchan -

First I want to say that you have done very well in keeping people in character I can totally see most of the characters behaving in just this way.

One thing that I noticed it sounds like Jo turned in a way that would make her balance completely on the foot peg (or if its like a jet ski on the foot board) for at least a few moments. I'm not sure but wouldn't that totally tip them over? With how Zane was talking if she did it like that then they should both be dead. I don't know if you've ever ridden in a jet ski or a motorcycle but on a jet ski I think there would be enough room for her to pull her leg up and over in front of her. Not sure why but that detail kind of bugged me.

Anyways I am really enjoying your stories, there actually some of the first Eureka fan fic I've tried. Quite nice.

Happy writing!

This is a perfect ending. The engagement part took me by surprise (good one!) but it works in the context of how you've developed these two. I especially like that Zane's the one that shows a little vulnerability in their coming together since it's usually the other way around. And when they finally get on the same page it's almost the same kind of satisfaction you'd have if they were people you really knew.

I enjoy the creative adventures you cook up for the town but I have to say what gets me every time is the playfulness and push/pull between Zane and Jo. To let them have these small moments in the middle of an ensemble story so to speak is so crafty and adding all of the other characters throughout is a nice way to pace things so that those moments really resonate. It makes for a very satisfying read.

I was going to reserve my comments until the end but I had to share how much I loved this chapter. It was both characters at their witty finest. Zane's outburst at the end about how their adventure was definitely not awesome is going to stay with me for a while. I can see him being completely annoyed with Jo because he's crazy about her and she just scared the crap out of him with her antics. I've been enjoying the tension between them for the whole story but this took the cake.

Yay new chapters! Okay for 11 it was very well described! I could picture it perfectly, although I kinda was hoping she'd stradle(?) him instead. Partly cause its more stable but mostly to catch Zane's reaction ;"D They would have to land though so I suppose if there's no time for a helmet there isn't time for that either.

The last chapter felt abit short but my inner shipper did a little happy dance :")

awwwwwwwwww that was so super adorable i almost cried! I love your stories so keep writing!

Still think the last chapter was the best, but the shipper in me screams in protest at that statement and clearly adores this one.

LOVE IT! Hmmmm where to start on that. I could just say I love it all and leave it at that but that would be no fun.

Love the opening, the description of the house yes, but more so the instictively reaching for the gun and Zane's "Did you just almost shoot me?" (hehehe)

Then I also really like the recounting of thier first meeting from his side, and all the stuff she says about how he's different/better than her Zane.

The other thing that was great/cute was the little bit at the end about the 7 kids. It was a good way to finish it off.

Hmm. Nice ending, but I'm a little confused. She told she was kidding about the ice cream in the first chapter. Why did he still think she liked it? Also, I was hoping for a little more closure about the bats. Oh well. Good job with this one, but personally, I liked An Australian Werewolf and their relationship in that more than this one. Still great job though! Are you gonna write any more?