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TwilightLover-CarlisleandEsme 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Awww! I love all of these! And you're such a good writer...please write more about them)
The-Sun-Princess 5/28/11 . chapter 1
d'aaaaaawwww
Anna 11/27/10 . chapter 1
SOO cute :D !
jessapink 11/26/10 . chapter 1
Cute)
theskydreamer 11/24/10 . chapter 1
This was so amazing! Great job!
Princess-Amon-Rae 11/24/10 . chapter 1
Awwwwwwwww. FLlllluffffff! yay! this is great i love it and I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!
xXCoral-RoseXx 11/24/10 . chapter 1
N'awwwwwww :P

That was cute!
Afterglow04 11/24/10 . chapter 1
*bounces
Ooh, how very cute! Warm and fuzzies indeed, you've certainly managed to warm me up on this freezing day, I'm grinning like an idiot :p"So what, you just randomly carry balloons in your back pocket?
I laughed out loud at this one, because it conjured up this image of Lisbon somewhat eyeing him suspiciously in her trademark look. Almost makes me believe Jane really is a clown
I enjoyed this!
P.S. I may be craving cereal right now as a direct result from reading this haha!
Frogster 11/24/10 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so cute! Especially the last bit. And I can just see Jane using a Cheerio to look at Lisbon, and talking to the cereal, and covering its "ears" so it wouldn't hear Lisbon's insult.

And I think Frosted Cheerios are the best.

Write more soon!
niza.the.mental.fan 11/24/10 . chapter 1
"Don't listen to her," he consoled his bowl of cereal, "she doesn't mean it.
very funny,that was for sure my favourite part,thasnks for your kind appreciation and thanks for making me laugh in what just seems to be a hell of a bad day for me...
Brown Eyes Parker 11/24/10 . chapter 1
I am NEVER disappointed when I read one of your stories. Thanks for posting. You cheered me up. And now, I'm off to try and write a childhood inspired fic. Not making any promises though.
Famous4it 11/24/10 . chapter 1
I love cheerios! This too of course! It's delightfully cute, and fluffy )
Jisbon4ever 11/23/10 . chapter 1
Awe... Really cute. The whole story was sweet. I love how they can just make conversation out of anything. No matter how silly it sounds, it's just intertaining. I loved Jane's last line. She really is his lucky charm. I would always take out the marshmellows bc 4 me it ruined the cereal... lol) Love the story.)
between the waves 11/23/10 . chapter 1
Holy fluffy bunnies, this is adorable!

Also, sorry but I'm gonna be permanently stuck thinking of Jane as a leprechaun now. I thought I'd gotten over that, but I'm afraid the Lucky Charms brought it back. xD

Cute story! :D
shepweir always 11/23/10 . chapter 1
Super cute. I had to read it twice so I could laugh again and again. It was so Jane to be enjoying and protecting his precious Cheerios. I love JIBSON. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. I do love your work and always look forward to your stories. Right now I am so hooked on the Mentalist. I appreciate your doing such a fabulous job bringing Jane and Lisbon to life.

Take a big bow well done.
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