|Reviews for Break Even|
| Jake Nickleby 9/12/11 . chapter 1
That's so... so... cold! I'm so shocked that it ended that way. I mean, I could see why she would be scared, but I suppose that some of the bluntness of her words is not how I expected her to say (in that certain way, at least). I felt that Linguini's emotions were spot-on, though. Well done!
| MewWolf5 8/14/11 . chapter 1
I thought your idea for this story was unique and interesting, and you definitly wrote it well.
However, I just feel like this is something that wouldn't happen, and it's a little out of character for them, so for those reasons I didn't really like it. Like I said before, though, you did a good job writing it.
| KingofJesters 4/12/11 . chapter 1
Beautifully dark. There are no words proper enough to describe this piece accurately. Well done, you have my upmost respect.