Nicely done, i must say. The black Buffamoo-that was a Buffazoo, was it not? And Iris actually IS a Vampire. I've already beaten the game's storyline, so i know exactly what all happens.

Mist isn't the first girl that comes to mind when I pair Raguna up with a girl, but I know she technically is the default maiden/pairing for Raguna. I'm more inclined to RagunaXCinnamon or even RagunaXIris.

This is, by far, one of the best, if not the best, definetly top two, fan fics I've ever seen, great detail, the descriptions of battle and enviroment were well done, and characters were potrayed expertly. I'd loved to see you do a fic about RagunaxIris, Noire or Blanche, or both, I'm a huge RagunaxIris fan, with RagunaxMist a close second. But yes, superb piece of writeing, thank you!

and Candy went through the Snow Ruins unharmed Mist does know how to .And Candy can use magic,I think.

Nice story,by the way.I like it.

Mist 3

She is a vampire, atleast that's what I've heard. I founda video on Youtube that the Black Iris and the White Iris became just the White Iris, I think it's becaus she is in fact a vampire. But, I've only gotten as far as getting it so I have met Melody, and I barely did that. But, then again, my farm is pretty clutered since I don't clean it up or plow the feilds or anything. Also, I have the DS version, and my charecter's name on there is Raback. I don't even remember why I named him that, I was, like, nine when I did that. Anyways, this was really good! I absolutely adored it! I hope to read more of your stoies, but right now, I gtota get some sleep... Please write more, though! Welp, bye! For now, anyway. *pushes glasses higher up on face*

Wait, didn't Mist went through the Snow Ruin and can out unharmed?

Did anyone else but me get the reference in the beginning to Pink Floyd's "Breathe In The Air"? No? Oh well...

Very nice job. MystxRaguna isn't my favorite pairing, but I liked this very much.

its great but i think it whud be better if there was a bit more romance in it.. i like the last part..it was beautifully written and thought of..

Mist does hav a beautiful side like that

i loved it.. please write more stories like this..

Hello, it's Sir Gigous, here to review your one-shot.

I must say, this story is definitely better than your last story. Everyone was in character, despite what you might think, and I loved the way you described the environment around Raguna. The way you intermixed the environment into the story without boring me (well, in some places anyway) shows the signs of a great author. Plus, this is the first time I've seen the word 'flummoxing' used. Interesting.

Based purely off of facts, this story was really good. Grammar, although there are some issues you need to iron out (mainly, the incorrect usage of '...', and some of your dialogue structure), was good, and as mentioned above so was your character's personalities; everyone was in-character. Also, although I detest this pairing (just like your last story :P), I believe the romance was very smooth. You may have overemphasized it a bit too much in places, but I still think it was fine.

The only real issue I have with this story is the plot development. I could tell you had a solid plot planned out, but you just branched off in too many places. There were too many irrelevant events going on, and I found myself feeling the urge to exit out of the one-shot and come back to it later. This may not bother everyone, but it was a little too much for me.

All in all, I recommend that everyone read and review this great story. Keep up the good work.[Sir Gigous]-