ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha suboshi got fired. poor suboshi! I Like this story!

WAI!!!!! KAWAII!!!!! WRITE MORE! I WANNA KNOW WHO YUI IS GONNA END UP WITH!!! ^ ^

I think Y/A is an interesting couple. There's a higher chance of that than Suboshi. Not that I don't like Yui and Suboshi together. Well continue on!

I don't think Amiboshi and Yui are a good couple. I may be obsessed with Miaka/Amiboshi, but I tried very hard to like Amiboshi and Yui as a couple and guess what? It just doesn't click. But I think that your story is pretty funny. I burst out laughing when Chichiri said something about how "the only free seats are behind a really fat lady, no da." I don't know why that was so funny, it just was!

It's cute! But you should change the honourifc attached to Yui's name. 'Sama' either means "lord" or "lady" and Miaka wouldn't call her best friend that, she calls Yui: Yui-chan. Most likely, if everyone is reincarnated, Yui would be called "Yui-san" meaning 'Miss Yui', if you want to indicate some degree of respect. Where you have written 'Ami-san', you might want "Ami-chan" to indicate some degree of affection.

Aside from that, it's very cute, one of the nice, lighter twins fics I've read in a while. I think you should fix the ending, making it last if you want to add more. =^.^=