On the one hand, we all know that Cameron has a raging case of hypochondria due to his parents emotional neglect.

But, what if it really isn't? What if he's really, really sick, and Ferris won't or can't leave him alone?

That's a thought that's scary.

Ferris is the Tony Stark of his high school; smart, snarky, devil may care, and sometimes insensitive twit who steamrolls over other people.

Excellent beginning to the story.

Well it was good...But it was just like the beggining of the movie...:/

There appears to be a lot of typos and spelling errors, and it's really just repeating exactly what happens in the movie. Why don't you fix the errors, and then elaborate more on how Cameron is feeling, emotionally? I'll bet it'll be very good.