|Reviews for Allegiance|
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 7
Amazing. Riza's one of my favorite characters in FMA and i just love how you portrayed her! Great chapter!
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 6
Can't wait to read the next chapter! I wonder how it turned out.
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 5
I think this chapter is actually pretty good. But, I never knew Armstrong worked under Roy...
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 4
Great, just amazing! I like your imagination and how you twist things.
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 3
I dont recall ever seeing Mustang drunk before! That was a truely amusing scene. Loved it!
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 2
AMAZING. I don't know what else to say.
| Swanfrost15 4/3/12 . chapter 1
Amazing! I shall read more.
| not paranoid enough 1/29/12 . chapter 3
I don't favorite stories lightly, so just know that the fact that I'm favorite-ing this story three chapters in means that I think it's really really awesome xD
| writer's legend 1/8/12 . chapter 9
That. Was. AMAZING! I can never look at all of them in the same way as before ever again, you really made all of the characters come to life. Great job!
| Elbenstern 1/4/12 . chapter 9
I really enjoyed reading your Story!
I barely can belive that you wrote the first chapter without having read the manga.
Also Fuery's chapter was really cool... Eyepatch and all... He*s just being a hero without realizing for himself.
Breda's Chapter was just hillarious... I can perfectly Imagine the two of them sitting there in their drinking contest and Hawkeye completely oblivious to this kind of "recruitment".
The Falman chapter seemed a bit rashed to me, with the transfer and so on... Although pairing him up with Sheska has potential! It was also good to find Tim Marco's Cooking book in there... I always wondered what would happen if someone tries to cook that stuff... well I suppose philosopher stones aren't tasty.
I cannot say so much about Armstrong. But I liked hís portrayal.
Hughes was great... This assasination Moment was so epic... Especially the dialouge between Hawkeye and the priest.
Hawkeye's chapter was... well, what I expected. I'm a Royai girl myself and thus I have pretty much made their story up in my mind. And this fit's in just nicely. Solemly the kiss in the end of the war seem out of charakter to me... I simply cannot Imagine them laughing in this situation, sorry.
Ed's chapter was difficult again, but again, everything fits.
Congratiolation for including the Duel-gaiden... In a non-parodic matter.
And I too think that Ed's loyalty to Roy originated in this talk with Hawkeye.
The epilouge was just so cute and fluffy... Completely what Roy and Riza deserve after so much suffering.
I also like the Idea of bringing Ed into it (since he is the one who knows how human transmutation works)
After all I enjoyed your story (apparently enough to write my longest rewiew ever), and It fits into my own interpretaion of the characters.
Thanks for writing it,
| XStrife 12/18/11 . chapter 9
I love how you ended this story. There wasn't too much sap or mushy stuff, it just ended off perfectly. Nicely done.
| Rufescent 12/16/11 . chapter 9
I wish I could fave this twenty times. It's so amazing!
Wonderful story, I am very glad you wrote it. These 9 chapters are fantastic - in character and writting, and I hope to see more stories from you again.
| Sezony 12/15/11 . chapter 9
PERFECT ending for this story! Congratulations on finishing it. I'm looking forward to your next FMA fic!
| Jason M. Lee 12/15/11 . chapter 9
BRAVO! :D *claps* Gorgeously written, and every single featured character here interacted BEAUTIFULLY with Roy.
| Harm Marie 12/15/11 . chapter 9