Brilliant. Really brilliant.

I thought this was a good story. I myself am a fan of Tarzan so when I saw this I had to read it. You captured the emtotions very well. Great job!

Very good. I loved this part of the movie (though not my favorite). I especially liked the last line!

A bit short though, isn't it?

I think for ur first story this is really good

It's a good concept. Thanks for writing it! A gentle recommendation. There are some word errors. Your sentences are in general correct, but continue to work on developing them.

Overall, good job :)

Thanks again!

OWWW what a wonderful moment!