This was an excellent begining to a fabulous story. Why didn't you continue this. I would have loved to know what would have happened next.

I can't believe that above person was so rude and generally stupid *shakes head*

Whoever they are, they are wrong. Personally all of the things I saw him say seemed like good things to me and I'm not quite sure how he managed to make them seem bad XD Then again, never trust someone who mentions 'french toast' in the middle of a review XD

Seriously, dark-type Pokemon mindlessly evil? What is wrong with this guy? I 3 dark type Pokemon!

Anyway, please write some more and I love all of your stuff! Let the haters hate.

Wow, really? THIS is what you choose to write about? Fire types? Canines? THE MOST OVERUSED POKEMON BESIDES THE EEVEE EVOLUTIONS? Wow. I would have thought better of you if I actually thought good of anyone with the name of a...EEVEE EVOLUTION (I HATE having to say those words!) in their name.

First of all! (No, that wasn't even the BEGINNING of what was wrong with this story). You have so many...HOUNDOUR...characters. I want VARIETY! Why would you have more than one of the same species as important characters? THAT IS NOT ORIGINAL.

And...oh my. I think I threw up some french toast. You used HUMANS? The most overused species EVER?

And...it got worse. You gave these HOUNDOURS...a...a...A PERSONALITY? LIKE YOU THOUGHT THAT WOULD MAKE THEM ORIGINAL? And these houndours are supposed to be seeing things differently rather than being evil? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? THE ONLY POKEMON WORTHY OF BEING MAIN CHARACTERS ARE POKEMON LIKE QUILFISH AND DUNSPARCE! OVERUSED DARK TYPES ARE SUPPOSED TO BE MINDLESSLY EVIL.

I'M FRENCH BOB! I KNOW THESE THINGS!

I'd lecture you more on the errors of your ways, but I must go clean out my haystack (and I bet an unoriginal person like you would live in a HOUSE. Conformist!).

- French Bob