Honest review: you started very strongly, but throughout chapter 3 lost my attention. Sorry, I stop reading. Consider editing?

-O.G.

The story is very good so far! I'm new to Phantom of the Opera, only having just watched the 2004 movie-version (with Gerard Butler as the Phantom, yum! xD), but I immediately fell in love with it. I'm really enjoying this fanfiction. It's my first POTO fic yet. Maybe it could inspire me to write my own one day! :3 I'm anxious to read the rest of the story. ;)

Love it so far! I much prefer the novel-Erik, and your descriptions of him are delightfully creepy.

Amazing! Erik's a real phantom now, mwahahaha! Your description of his appearance is so graphic and I love that! And I like Abby, too. She seems so real! Erm, realistic, that is.

"The Phantom of the Opera was here again." I actually squeaked when I read that line! I'm loving this story!

Ooky! "Did I just hear organ music?"

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i can't wait to see what happens next chappie XD

Hm. I still can't figure out what you've got going on with Erik's revival. I like it though and I'm so glad that you're updating quickly. Still, don't make me or anyone feel like you need to rush things!

Wow, I love your physical description of Erik. You find the good and unique in with what most would just call disgusting or abnormal. Abby seems to be much more dynamic of a character than Christine was in the novel, play, or movie, and I love that. It already adds so much to your story. I'm more interested than ever to see where you take this! I know you could make this into a fantastic story.

I like where you're taking this. I can't predict any of it, and that's a welcome change from what I've been reading. :D