I would prefer number 1. I think doing number 4 is a good idea too. Please keep writing; I want to read more for what happens next.

I find this fic very amusing. A nice way to end my day. Absolutely lovely. I hope you can finish this wonderful fic so you could start one for Rue.

Neat

This is good

Heehee, I've actually already read this I didn't review simply because I hadn't really read the earlier chapters, I don't know enough about it to comment intelligently-D Hehee, you've hit the nail on the head as to why I'd never want to be a stand up comic! I'm not that fond of long silences (heh, then again you already know that don't you?-D Heh, 'Lunarian has left the building' cute! LOL, this is starting to sound like a few parties I've been t Heehee, my general rule of thumb is when there are more people outside throwing up, than inside enjoying the part it's time to make a swift exi Hehe, they've never gotten that bad! (Only the police have ever been calle well the police or the Gard O)? Phew, glad ours never got that bad! Ooo, but places have been trashe then agai not nearly to that extent! A Poor Lunarian! That's just plain mean! Oh how painful it is to read about such horrible things to do to valuable collectibles! Oh dear poor Lunarian has no idea, he's in for a nasty shoc And there it is! Heehee 'his first thoughts being holy and hell and then on second glance removes the holy.' Great line! (oh dear, if you ever get to the latter chapters in my fic you'll find a line remarkably similar to this one 'sends a silent prayer to whatever deity may be listening.' Great minds I guess-D) LOL, great last line too! And of course you have a valuable moral for the readers, good for you! Heehee-D Your HTML looks good, I can’t really answer the other questions though-D Smiles for the chapter I throughly enjoyed it! As always keep on writing!

eh? o.O that was...um...interesting. yes, it was very much so. em...u spelled their wrong. it's their not thier. just though you wanted to know that.u forgot an apostrophe earlier when you talking about the club. eh...aynthing else? cna't remember. i'm brain dead right now. so yah. cya next chappie. ja ne!

Alright, this is Rory:Xylaphone Music First let me say I was intrigued to read this story because of how wonderfully written your e-mail was. It was great to read, I absolutely LOVE your grammar. Thus, by then I already knew you HAD to be a GREAT writer, and...surprise, surprise, I was right. (hehe). But, really...let's get on with this.

Star Rating/5 Stars

Review: I thought this story was actually kind of confusing. While your writing was superb, the style that it was written in, and what you were writing about made me extremely confused. I had never even heard of the topic you are writing about until today, and when I read it, I am sorry to say I was lost. I did laugh a few times, and I thoroughly enjoyed the parts that I understood, so that proves to me that you have the talent to make this a great story. They way you introduced the charachters was kind of rough, it was too much information to handle at once, you were very straight forward about them all, and just listed their traits, and I think there could've been a better way to explain them. All in all, this was a pretty good story, maybe if I knew more about what you are writing then I'd get more out of it, but for now, I think your work would be more appreciated if we all knew what you were trying to say. Oh yeah, and don't forget your commas.
Rory

heh, ur arguements with the other u is cute. so yah, nice chapter and i DO get confused when you do that. it's sorta like a euphimism. crap, i even know if i spelled that right. anywho, that's all i can handle for today. oh yah, still need commas n stuff. cya next chapter. ja ne!

multiple personalities, eh? so yah, interesting chapter once again. i never really variate with what i say. -_- mint is always an amusing character. i'd really like to see that dude scrubbing toilets. okies baiz!

interesting so far. you might want to add some more comas and semi commas here and there. i'm not used this sort of style of writing. i prefer a different kind but it's good so far. i'll see you next chapter. ja ne! -

ô_o I still didn't understand most of it...but I laughed alot...

This is looking good! Sorry I didn't review this earlier tho...

still lookin' good!

Great job! Heh heh, I like the forest-toothpick thing *snickers* Yes, this chapter made much more sense, I'm not confoosed anymore. I'd looove to read your next chapter, so keep up the good work!

Thank you for writing this story! It was really good! I am a HUGE TOF fan.

Keep writing. You have a lot of potential!