Aww how cute! Congrats on your first one shot. I know how nerve wracking it is. I was chewing on my nails as I hit the submit button on mine.

This is amazing. Especially for your first one, my first was nowhere near as good as this. Great work! :) -Fallenfortheculle (Fallforthecullen Fanfiction- fb)

i dont know what you're talking about. this is really good!

You should have extended till Jazz really meets Alice ... I mean stopped right at the most awaited part :(.. but i loved it :)

This was so cute, you have to cont it...

My birthday is December 21st also...LOL.. can I have Jasper

OMG! Ok...you definitely got my attention...Now...I think you need to continue with it. Just sayin. ;) Hope you do.

marriedmyedward :)

awesome bb! I'm so glad you posted and I'm thankful you let me help! I agree with Jo. mb another chapter? lol *muah*

hi hun...mich sent me on over to give this a read and to drop you a line. i remember when i wrote my first oneshot...and had a ball seeing the response. i'm glad you've posted your story. great first story...that first paragraph was hot! you can't go wrong with a bit of naked jasper! you could easily continue with this. i shall alert you...and please feel free to drop me a line or check out my stories...i shall check you on twitter as well. xxxcheers. lisa.

WOW!

Rest easy. I really loved it. Thank you for my naked Jasper. (I promise I will finish naked Emmett after uni tonight for you)

I loved the date of birth, well research miss!

It might have been short, but it had everything it needed. You could quite easily continue this if you wanted to.

xxx

That was great Gem! You finally have a story to call your own!

Well done for writing in and getting it out there!

I thin I need more maybe a second chapter!