ugh Bella's such a whiny bitch. it's sickening how everyone just act's like she's some kind of Queen

What a beautiful story!

Loved it. Yessss a full story.

Wow, incredible. Don't know how you got that all into oneshot. Really emotional.

wonderful story, please continue their love story. It was never only puppy love but true love that Edward kept himself for her and true Bella had not only a crush but desired faithful love for him.

Thank you

That was such a beautiful story andvi look forward to the time you are able to expand it.

I think this is most likely one of my top favorite one shots I have ever read. Very poignant, well written you drew me into "their" storyyour way. You owned this one darlin' you truly have some righteous writing skills and I for one, would Love to see you continue this to a full fic, Oh Yeah! Even if it is only 10 chapters or so it would be a great story to expand, to see how thing go for them as they mature and grow together. Nicely Done, Kudos to ya! KimiD

This was great! I hope you do turn this into a full fanfic! In the meantime I'm going to continue with your other stories!

Would love to see a continuation :D Please post an alert to this story if you do continue and post it as a seperate story, as I'm alerted to this fic only :)

Overall very sweet and sexy too. I have a few questions and comments though, if you don't mind?

"I had never been an overly sexual person. I was never turned on easily, and I barely spent any time thinking about sex, but even I knew that Edward Cullen could make anything sexy."

The way B says the above - has she been turned on before or thought about sex with someone other than Edward?

Though Edward was partly at fault I felt that Bella was more so at fault in this fic and remained angry with herfor being so hard on Edward. It was she who walked away and hypothetically speaking if he really had wanted to leave Forks ASAP, that hardly gave her the right to discontinue speaking to him. She was the one who left and she could have made contact. And then she was cursing him for going back on his promise to be at her 18th and when he showed up she flipped out. Not to mention she did/tried to slap him 3 times - after she commented that she hated to hurt him after the first hit. And after the first half of Edward's explanation about her being underage she quickly explains how hurt she was and even though she softened for a moment and was crying she gos nuts on him again. Even at the end of the fic, she still doubted E's sincerity to stay with her and be with her.

Would love to see this continued. And sorry if it sounds like I'm bitching about the story, because I'm not. Truly. I loved it. I'm just annoyed at Bella and the way she chucked all the blame on Edward.

Hi Sarah from sunny Glasgow. Just read your Cherry Exchange entry. Loved it, so angsty, so touching and well written.

Pimm, from beautiful Loch Lomond.

WOW, I loved this o/s and would really love it if you expanded this story. Would love to see where you take it and also the family's reaction to them finally being together.

Really loved this! Thank you.

Loved it, absolutely loved it. Yes I would definitely love to read more. Great job.

please, please, please turn this into a long story or maybe do an epilogue. this was wonderful. i would love to read about the family's reactions.

Yes please continue this! I loved this story so much!