i like this please continue x

Intresting, update soon please :D

update soon!x! D!

wait wait wait woah woah hold up...not enough background here...do they get to keep the babies? or do they haul em off like cattle after? I'm really confused. and this don't seem very "hunger games-y" is this supposed to be district 13 a long time ago or whatttt? and this could definitely be a successful thing on its own...reminds me of the movie "The Island"

"They were named Edward, Clyde, Cedric, Oakley, Ulysses and Hudson."

Hahaha, reminds me of Troy, Twilight, Annie Oakley, and Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire.

"Today, my friend, Royal (The Royal Oak), is being bred to a Ulysses male rumored to be named Oliver (Jet's Black Fire). Oh, I didn't mention we had registered names? Sorry. We do. My registered name is Oak's River Shadow. Nifty, isn't it?"

Sounds far too disturbingly like horse registered names and breeding...then again, I suppose the capitol treats any outsiders akin to animals.

Otherwise a very well-written and interesting story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

amazinngggggggg please write more!

It's an interesting storyline, and I'm pretty impressed by this since I usually don't like it when people make up characters. Keep up the good work :)

this storys really good. chapter 2's kinda graphic, but you warned us, so it's fair... right? I really like the whole 6 sires idea tho :)

o and btw im writing for the hunger games too, but mines the 100th hunger games, so basically what if the rebellion didnt work... its really good check it out and please REVIEW

my usernames carojeans and well i only have one story so... anywayy check it out :)

Lol this chapter was nice _ Update soon

I liked it. I think it's just a tad boring. But the idea is very good. The story is written well, perfectly descriptive but not repetitive. It goes at a good pace, not to fast or slow. Good job, and I'm looking forward to more :)

I realy enjoyed this story so far plaes hury and write more :)

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YES run away together!

The concept of this story is sick and twisted, so of course I like it already. ;) This reminds me a lot of this book I read, "Anthem". Not quite the same, but the general theme in totalitarian societies remains constant.

It was good but kinda boring keep going your a really good writer

Very interesting (and disgusting!) concept. I hope Beatrice does something rebellious... run away, fall in love, etc. Anyways, looking foward to an update :)