this was a cute and might i say great idea for a story and i loved how you kept time with the original story of night before Christmas it was funny great rhyming skills to by the way!

Aw. I thought it was really funny how Jareth's mood changes at the present and when I read "sack" I hoped. It's very funny that the goblins wrapped Sarah up for him also very sweet. :)

This was really cute!

I can't believe I missed this. I loved it!

Oh my god! IT'S ALL IN VERSE.

I love you. You're so amazing. This made my night. :)

genius! you made it rhyme and everything! brilliantly done!

Alright... That. Was. A. Ma. Zing.

I love Christmas. I love the Labyrinth. And you mad a Labymas story! It was fabulous. Thank you SOOO much.

thyat was awesome great bring some holiday cheer

So fun! Loved the rhyming & the goblins. :)

ADORED! This was total genius. I love that you got it all to rhyme just like the original. Merry Christmas!

cute D

haha omg this was brilliant. the rhyming was so effortless and endearing (i just about lost it when things couldnt get any worse and then a goblin farted). a charming christmas tale :)

Absolutely hilarious! great job!

*giggles* Adorable story, I was thinking something similar cause of those clever little goblins.

AWESOME :D wow you did so well in making it rhyme the whole way through! Hehe it was great, now im in a Christmassy mood :P so cute!