What can I say about this?

You are the only writer that I have ever read that has been able to write a believable and likable orginal character in FFX and with Auron no less.

Kahva is funny, insightful, and quite engaging; it was a pity she was not in the game. Her interactions with Auron are some of the most amusing and heartbreaking I have come across.

"The grave's a fine and private place,
but none, I think, do there embrace..."
Yeah, I actually got the reference.
I really love this fic. Why? 1) No Aurrikku, a pairing which is just... eww. 2) A well-written, non-sickeningly-perfect original character with *gasp* an actual personality 3) Nice characterization of Auron 4) Just plain interesting and well written.
You are now on my favorites list

Wow... That was such a wonderful fic! _ You have Auron charterized so well, and you have also created an original character who is likeable and fleshed out. Those are not easy things to do, and I admire any author who can pull it off. I would be very interested in seeing more stories about Kahva, if you had the inclination to continue writing about her.

Yay! Well written, yummy Auron back story!

It moved really fast, but other than that it was awesome! Very believable, and I think the ending suited it well. Well done! _

I read through the first couple paragraphs and this looks prety interesting, but most unfortionatly, I have to go to school. *dammit* so I'll print it out and have something to read today. _ I'll review when I get home.)