|Reviews for Head On Collision|
| jessie2you 4/19/13 . chapter 10
So, this story...I am in absolute love with it! I have read so much fanfiction from many different shows/movies etc and this is definitely one of my top favorite of all time. I am usually lazy about long stories and skip a little. I read every single word of this one. I started it the night before last, thought about it all day yesterday and managed to read a few chapters on my phone, continued last night and when I finished, it was sunrise. I'm still thinking about this story and considering reading it again. I'll be checking out your others and am hoping you'll do something similar to this again in the future. I just don't know if I can wait between chapters! Haha. Thank you so much for sharing your writing talent!
| Guest 3/18/13 . chapter 52
This story was so heart touching :')
| computerfan11 3/15/13 . chapter 52
WOW This story is amazing!
| SkyWriter 1/26/13 . chapter 52
oh...my...GOD! this is seriously one of the best freaking fanfictions I've ever read! you,my friend are talented...extremely talented. I loved the angst and the way you just...oh I can even explain it! it was so GOOD!
it took me a whole 3 days to read an I hardly put my iPad down. because of this story, I only got about 6 hours of sleep cuz I stayed up reading this! I skipped a class for this story cuz of a major cliffhanger that I needed to read!
you ha me crying while I was reading...no not even crying, you had me SOBBING. I swear, they were tears of sadness and joy!
When Logan was a little kid, you made me tear up because of his cuteness. he was so sweet and adorable! poor James I just wants to run up to him and give him a hug. and when Logan woke up ttalking about the car accident I screamed. that's right. screamed. people where staring! Lol. I was excited! I felt so bad for Logan and James the most in this story, their friendship at the end was . beautiful! an you ended it amazingly, of course.
this story was awesome. I would say make a sequel because if I really it again, I'd know everything! but what would you do for a sequel? a one- shot of one of Logan's headaches maybe?
-Keep writing in the sky,
| ArianamaslowBTR25 9/17/12 . chapter 52
i read this whole story in a day and i absolutly fell in love with it. just amazing, i don'y usually find people with a writing style that i like on Fan fiction but this just what i love. great job
| LoVin tHIs fIc 8/17/12 . chapter 52
Damn you and your amazing story's! I'm afraid your Angst Monster has bitten me and forced me to stay up until 2.30 in the morning to finish this story, even though i have to be up for work a 6am tomorrow...Stupid, addictive Angst Monster!
Just wanted to share some of the love and let you know how amazing your story's are, and i hope you continue writing in the future. Now, excuse me, but i'm off to start ANOTHER one of you story's!
x x x
| CelestialSonata7 7/3/12 . chapter 52
I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter like I should have, but every chapter was just so enticing that I couldn't pull myself away from knowing what happened next.
Plus, even after reading everything, I still can't find the right words to describe how I feel about it.
This story was, amazing, to put it lightly. Everything was so deep and heavy, the heartache the boys felt was so real. I could feel, as I was reading it, the weight and heaviness that the boys felt.
Then the small, long wished for joy they felt, was so sweet.
The bond that kept these boys together was so strong, I loved it!
I knew Logan was going to get better! I just knew it! That made me so happy, I can't even describe it!
I'll admit, I kinda wanted to see more with Logan's cluster headaches, but I'm glad the boys got a break. It felt like all that weight that slowed everyone down was lifted, ever so slightly, and it made me smile. :)
I really enjoyed this story thoroughly. You are an amazing writer! I really liked it. :)
| winterschild11 5/11/12 . chapter 52
incredible story. I had a friend who had a similar injury, unfortunately never regained her full capacity. You told this story with amazing depth and perception. Thank you
| Do You Wonder 5/5/12 . chapter 13
Great story so far!
| soarlikeaneagle 3/11/12 . chapter 20
OK, so I luv how u were all "He wondered if monsters really did exist."" and then u were all " Lalala."
| chocolate-colombo 1/20/12 . chapter 52
This story was so amazing that I'm lost for words. Everything about it was crazy (I use the word "crazy" very loosely, so "crazy" means good and awesome here)
It touched my heart. Logan going from genius to elementary school kid again was just sad.
James practically "killing" himself with guilt and Kendall finding it hard to keep it together was heart breaking.
I was amazed the most by Carlos. 'Nuff said.
| squoctobird 1/17/12 . chapter 52
I enjoyed this story for the most part. Great job as usual Miss Fenway.
My only critique at this point would be to point out a medical inconsistency. After Logan's brain damage was reversed, it seems his limp also disappeared? That should of stuck around since it was weakened by the severe fractures and not the brain damage. Leaving out that detail, you missed an opportunity for James to feel guilty about it. As if he didn't have enough things to feel guilty about, right? ha. It would have been nice to see James come to terms with things even with Logan's constant reminder.
Anyways, that's just a little thing to think about. )
| squoctobird 1/17/12 . chapter 47
ok, so it doesn't look like this is a dream... unless it happens in another chapter...
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was how it told the whole (most of it anyways) all over again. Maybe it's because I'm reading it all straight through (as best I can) but it felt unnecessary to repeat everything. Sure, this conversation happened, but did we need to read it? I don't think so.
| squoctobird 1/17/12 . chapter 46
If this whole gaining his memory back is just a dream I will be SO upset.
| randomwriterssummit 1/16/12 . chapter 6
I just started sobbing...