Excellent!

Wow I think this is very good it shows a side to people that most try and hide

Very powerful. I'm not really sure what to say- she's a very interesting character. If we've met her, I'm sure she's Pansy Parkinson.(That covers all the bases pretty well, doesn't it? "If we've met her. Whoever she is, the story, short though it is, definitely packs a good punch.

very cool, but not personal. I liked the detail about the royality, though.

Spiff-a-riffic. Painting a DE as a victim of circumstance- and a non-Snape DE, at that- is a very interesting concept, I'm actually surprised that there aren't more DEs out there with a heart. Well done.