It's a very good read and it would be really something if you can update this! ;) I hope for more! Great job! ;)

I think u captured Akihiko's character very well. I'm also hooked on this game so I'd like if us finish! I wanna read more! XD

I love these extended views and things of the rank ups for the and they're in character and believable! Thanks for satiating my love for these two! Keep it up!

I love this story; I check back all the time to see if it is updated. You have great writing skills and you catch each characters personality so well. Keep up the great work; I can't wait to see this finished!

Also, the preview for your other story sounds really interesting ;)

how many events did you put in this one? i hope you can upload your possible story

Great chapter, and I also re-light the fire that was going out for Persona 3 portable but I found it again once I began replaying it.

I've seen that Image. Cool I can't wait to see what you will write about.

Hmm... for some reason this chapter feels rushed. There's too much dialogue and too little actual writing describing how Akihiko feels. The scene that switches to the Tartarus exploration also threw me off because there wasn't a line break to indicate a change in scenes. As for keeping Akihiko in-character, I think he's still alright. He's starting to get sidetracked because of his growing feelings for Minako, but as I said before, there was too much of the S. Link dialogue and not enough of Akihiko's thoughts. Just because you're using the game script doesn't mean you can skip writing your own stuff.

As for your pending P3P story idea, you should put it on hold. If you haven't the slightest clue as to how it's gonna go, then it won't end well D:

Oh yay! I'm sooo glad you are still writing this story \(0)/ I simply LOVE how you write. No need to worry; you have Aki in character. Keep writing and I'll keep reading lol.

Hmmm now that story idea of yours sounds very interesting. I think I have seen the pic you are talking about too ) Well, you have my full support if you decide to go along with writing it! Planing out a story can be very hard; I'm having the same problem with one that I'm doing. Have you ever played Tales of the World: Radiant Mythology? I'm writing a fanfic for that. I am a major perfectionist so it's hard for me to finish a story due to me always wanting to change a single sentence over and over till I'm happy with it. As a result must stuff I'm trying to write never gets completed heh (_)' BUT! I'm trying to force myself not to do that...so here's hopin' I can write a story for once. Ummm...sorry for kinda getting off topic.

This was just too ADORABLE! I am absolutely loving this. I can't wait to read more \(0)/ Keep up the good work. Everything I have read so far has just been perfect.

I like this story even though youre simply following the storyline, adding some flavor to it. Great work, youre skilled at describing them and I like how you formed minako (thats hard because sha basically has no personality since the player decides) I hope you can update soon.

sweeeett! awwww.! i'm gonna get diabetes 'cause of this hahaha :)))

Yukari is so clever... dense ppl are quite funny sometimes! unless they exceed their limit. i would have a heart attack if someone asked if i were dating a Junpei like person

wow i love these please write more of these i really enjoy reading them :)

Heya (Happy New Year!)

Just read through your story and really enjoyed it :)

Like the others who already reviewed I have to say that you managed to keep Akihiko IC which isn't all that easy and I do like your version of Minako and how you added more to the dialogue content of the game (has been said before as well), etc.

Sorry I'm a bit "stiff" when it comes to review in English.

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to your next chapter! :D

Heehee...this was in a word...ADORABLE! I love how you are portraying the FeMC and you do a great job with keeping Akihiko in character. I had so much fun reading this. I like how you added in extra dialog before and after the s-link event too. It made the story flow smoothly. I remember playing this s-link event through and wondering things like "I wonder what they talked about on their way back to the dorm" etc.

Looking forward to the next chappy! Keep up the good work.