|Reviews for MY IMMORTAL: A love before time|
| violetkisses 9/20/11 . chapter 12
wow, im so excited for the next chap.
| Fairy5706green 9/18/11 . chapter 12
I know things are all leading to the birthday party and total unlock of memorizes of everyone. All I can think of when Ryoma's past lovers (PoT5's fathers), the people connected to them, and the PoT5 is Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!
I mean, come on, relationships like what your foreshadowing will certainly be head spinning to everyone involved.
Also I wonder if someone killed PoT5's fathers past Ryoma, and that's why Keiichi is puzzled over the age difference and everything? Because that's the only way I see this is possible. It would make a lot of things make more sense.
Also I can't wait to see what exactly went it down all those years ago, because up till now we have only gotten bits and pieces of it, and its making me anxious.
| Faoiltierna 9/18/11 . chapter 12
You definitely delivered on the angst!
Ooo, the curse is weakening...the men's memories are returning...I feel that we are building to a climax and I'm quite excited! :-)
| MintLeafeon 9/18/11 . chapter 12
Poor Ryoma...he has to go through so much pain every time he falls in love. I really hope that when he is free, he'll try to find love once more instead of ending everything. He should have a happy ending after everything that he has been through after all...
| lilgurlanima 9/18/11 . chapter 12
well were getting nearer to the conclusion right? i really wanna know soon what happens at the party...
| violetkisses 9/18/11 . chapter 11
omg, please update soon! :)) nice chapter.
| lilgurlanima 9/12/11 . chapter 11
OMG... hope the 4 of them stay strong... and i can't wait for the birthday party... i wonder what eventful thing might happen?
| animelover4ever69 9/12/11 . chapter 11
Despite your block...it's turned out well! I like this a lot!
| MintLeafeon 9/11/11 . chapter 11
Oh...my...goodness...Ryoma thinks he is protecting them by being mean, but now this has happened...argh this is starting to hurt my head with all of the thinking lol...love the chapter and hope to see more
| secret25 8/6/11 . chapter 10
Man I didn't even see that ch10 was the last chapter posted thus far. A bit disappointing, I wanted to read more.
Oh well... But anyway wanted to let you know first of all that the your WONDERFUL story is the reason that I'am currently losing or have lost sleep. Not that I'm complaining of course! It was worth it! :D
There's so many things going on in this story that I don't know what I should concentrate on more. But it's quite intriguing and so many twist and turns have been made.
I can't believe that Ryoma is so closely conncted to Sanada's family, that doesn't often happen, Sanada usually gets ignored, maybe it's because it's hard to cature his personality and his background? Well either way you do a wonderful job of doing just that. I hope that the other families will be just as in depth as this.
I don't exactly know what to feel about Ryoma being Gensuru's first love but he is no longer interested right? None of the adult are right? I mean ya know in the romantic sense, it's just curiosity from the lost memories right?
For a moment there i kinda wanted them to meet, Gensuru and Ryoma but I guess it isn't the time. Syuusuke's father, Yamato I believe also fell for Ryoma am I right? The muse for his paintings? Every single ome of the fathers fell for Ryoma how weird is that I mean their sons are interested in the same person they had feelings for and kissed at one point. It's just a bit weird but it does spice things up. hmmm... I'm not sure if it just slipped my mind but does Mitsu's father have a connection with Ryoma?
Keigo's father, the ring around his neck. I'm interested in his connection to Ryoma's past and the story about said jewelry. Among all the current fathers he seem to be the most in love? Still attached? He seems to be the one that can't let go, the other's feelings could be passed off as curiosity expect maybe his. I have no idea if I'm making sence but hopefuly I'am.
With the ways things are going I've concluded that as of right now you seem to be more focused on clearing the past first while adding ot4 and Ryoma where you can. ?
I feel so bad about the curse that Ryoma found himslef in. But I actually do have a question about that. Sendoh altered the curse and I don't quite understnd, if he finds the right one to love the curse will be lifted? He won't be suffering from always having to have the one he loves lose their memories right? Did I get it right? And any and all I missed that went a long with the alteration could you let me know please? And one more thing if it is a curse then what is the meetings for about freeing him? Freeing him from what exactly? I don't understand, I thought it was just the curse binding Ryoma? Yeah Ryoma's still helpls the clan prospers but isn't that just duty? I mean I don't understand is he being force to do that?
I really hope more progress happens with the ot5 and I will be waiting for Atobe's and Kuni's joint b-day celebration! Ancestry party! :D
I really loved this but there's still so many question's hanging so I hope that they be answered soon, if not all then at least one by one. I'm guessing that before the ot5 can be together all the past must first be cleared? I cna't wait to see how things unfold for the ot5 and their families.
Every life seems to be just entraced by those golden orbs...
Anyway the surname Kobe, is in the Atobe family name, Keigo's mother.,., she'll be the the cause for yet another painful fate won't she?
There are still many obstacles to tackle down but for now let's focus on Ryoma's past loves and what could hopefully be his future loveS.
Thank you for the wonderful story! You are brilliant for having come up with this amazing plot. You're a genius! :D I mean isn't it hard to juggle so many aspects of this story? It isn't just the love between ot5 but their families, their enemies, their past, their lives and connections, seems a whole lot to juggle around, and a whole lot to think and write about but either way you're doing a marvelous job! :D I commend you on.
I hope you continue to write and give us more! Thanks for the intruiging tale and long chapters! :D
I'll be waiting for more,
PS. Sorry for the horribly long review.
| Lord Of The Plushies 7/28/11 . chapter 10
So...Ryoma has been in relationship with the OT4's grandfathers? Ah, this story just get's more and more interesting with every chapter. _ But, now I want to see the party! That should be interesting
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! o Keep up the writing!
| lilgurlanima 7/22/11 . chapter 10
if they have only arrived earlier... does this mean they will all meet at the party if ever?
| Guest 7/22/11 . chapter 10
wow. this is getting more intense. i wonder if they will remember ryoma
| dustfeather1864 7/21/11 . chapter 10
i just love this story and i cant wait in till the party but will ryoma still go even knowing that he has to dress like one of his past lives well i hope he does cuz i cant wait to see the looks on everybody's faces when they see ryoma dressed like that it will be amazing also i love how the chapters are so long keep it up cant wait for the next chapter update asap :)
| TsumetaiYuuki 7/21/11 . chapter 10
It seems that he is tied to everyone for generations. And the whole 'meeting Ryoma did wonders for my memory; you should try it' thing was just darling.
Thank you for the wonderful update!