| Reviews for Christmas with Auggie |
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edwardfiend 2/10/13 . chapter 24very sweet and festive! :) |
pamela.f.dillon 12/26/12 . chapter 24A great story, I read it all in 2 sittings. Thanks |
MistressSunshine 9/6/12 . chapter 3 Hi! I realize this is one of your earliest works, and I've thoroughly enjoyed your writing, so please accept this as constructive criticism and not an attempt to be cruel. Annie has some very bad blind etiquette in this chapter. Auggie is a fully functional and self sufficient person; attacking him with a wet paper towel is rude, especially if she doesn't give him any warning. The concept itself is adorable, don't get me wrong, but I don't blame Auggie for 'squirming' - or worse! Also, and this is probably a personal preference, I would have liked to see Auggie more involved in the mixing process. I'm fairly certain the man can handle a bowl and spoon - and more than likely the measuring and pouring, with a couple of hints. It would have been an adorable chance to banter and work together! I love the image of him carefully centering the chocolate kisses, though! Again, please don't take this harshly; you've got a great sense of storytelling, and I enjoy the stories I've read so far! I'd just like to make sure Auggie gets a fair part, as the frankly awesome person he is - like everyone who has to deal with a 'disability.' |
Athena64 8/9/12 . chapter 24I thoroughly loved the story! Great writing, really... wondreful! thank you so much! |
Cat130 5/31/12 . chapter 11loving the story so far |
miss-tarletone 1/2/12 . chapter 24I loved it! Love, love, love, LOVED it! I read 37 other Christmas stories this year (not just covert affairs, though) and I think this was the best. I'm just sorry to see it go:(. BUT, now you MUST write a wedding story (even if it's very short) that follows this story! and btw I liked the other family members a lot, especially Grayson and Ari. Thank you for writing this story, it was very fun to read. Keep writing and have a good year (sorry its a bit belated). |
bookish327 12/17/11 . chapter 24This was so utterly lovely! You write Annie & Auggie so wonderfully together. Absolutely adored every second of this fic! :-) |
Eris1031 12/13/11 . chapter 24I just have to say that this is officially the most saccharine-sweet-sugary story ever published. Anywhere. I LOVE IT! |
Brianca 12/12/11 . chapter 8I've been to Longwood Gardens at Christmas. Used to go there on field trips with my highschool art class to sketch the displays. Very cool of you. Not too many people outside of garden enthusiasts know about it. By the way loving the story! |
BaltimoreJaxs 8/22/11 . chapter 24Okay, it took me threedays to read all of these wonderful, silly, carzy stories!It was Christmas in July! I do hope that you will gift us with another December holiday read a thon this coming Christmas, I might actually learn to bear the month, if you do! Thanks again! |
SomeKindaWonderful 7/27/11 . chapter 24Wow, this is definitely one of my new fave Augnie stories! Great job :) |
RLBB 7/19/11 . chapter 24I absolutely love this story. It was so sweet reading about Annie making Auggie do all sorts of lovely Christmas activities. And the way they got together was adorable. You wrote it so well :) Good job! |
Written Fire 7/3/11 . chapter 24You made me cry. I love this pairing, and have from the first episode. You did a WONDERFUL job! :) |
JessieLightyear 7/1/11 . chapter 24Oh my goodness what was amazing! You did such a good job keeping them light and happy while still in character and Auggie was just amazing (as usually) :] |
jayley 5/29/11 . chapter 24wow, loved it:) it also made me wish christmas would come back faster! |