whoa... this story is so sad... wah! pls. oh pls. do continue it.

AW... so sweet...

Thats was sad.

*Sighs wistfully* To be honest, this song reminded me of Kenshin since the first time I heard it. It almost makes me cry (Not that I'd admit that to my other friends either of those things...) Wonderful songfic... *starts daydreaming again*

Although this is well written, it seems to follow the lines of the usual "bitterness/angst" fic concerning Jinchuu. These fics are good to read, but they don't add more to the genre. (They don't detract from the genre either, thank God.) Either way, try to push this song fic into the realms of the adventurous.... be experimental and controversial if you must. I think you have the skill to make this fic even better.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.. it's so.. sentimental.. i nearly cried
well written, one of the best songfics i've ever read ^^ it's so ken-chan to think this way.. i never knew someone could express this well, great job! write more please? maybe a fic this time, i think u'll do great.. and the subject? OF COURSE K&K but no angst please anymore.. i prefer romantic knk hehe.. great job again and write more!

ps. hurray! I think I'm the first to review