Wonderful! I loved it. I definitely think you played the entire scene beautifully without making it to smutty. It was very delicate and balanced with enough attention to detail to make it seem realistic. Keep writing!

that was so good! and i thought it ended perfectly

i loved this story... nice touch by putting Rita Seeker in there... the last line seemed apropiate to me... i would love to see a second chapter... even though this oes seem like a one shot... like i said... wonderful story :)

i really like your story. good job

I'm unlucky 13 nooo! Neways great story. You don't need a proper ending l;ine for that - it's great the way it is. Well, keep writing cause - as Ron would say. "It's bloody brilliant!"

that was luverly. short, sweet, and with some R/H lovin' thrown in for good measure. {eyebrow waggle} i like the Shakespeare quote at the beginning. very apropos.

Del 1 of Aria-chan's multiple personalities

Very good so far

I like it! I love the fluff, so this was good...just right...not too tawdry, just enough to make it interesting...do continue the story!

Lauren

that was good! i mean, it was kinda weird, it's not the stuff i usually read, but it was really good,

keep writing!

Hey, now that's a great fic! I personally think its a not so bad ending, but hey, that's just me! ;) Keep up the great work!

nice!

I thought it was very sweet.

I liked it ! I loved it! It was great!

That was good. I usually don't read stories that are pg-13 because a lot of them don't have plots but this one was sweet. Nice job!

Addy N.

That was awesome wether your friend likes it or not :)

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