I Can't Wait Till She Gives Birth! Amazing!

love the story

are you just overly busy? or are you having writer's block? or are you giving up on this story?

continue writing this story's awesome!

Intriguing so far. Nice prose, good imagery. Some missing punctuation here and there, and there should be paragraph breaks when the speaker in a dialogue changes, but those issues can always be fixed. I do like the original concept of the story: I don't think I've ever come across a fic in which Radagast the Brown of all the Istari has a child. It's good to see novelty in the way of focusing a story on characters who are neglected in fanfiction, like Beorn and his family, and Radagast.

There is just one slip-up that caught my eye: when Caraneth said "An Istari, Maia incarnate, immortal," the word should be "Istar", since it's singular.

Certh

Wow, this is really interesting. These character's really don't get enough attention. And thank God you've read the books and know something about Elvish. And you can actually write.

Glad to see a new chapter. :) I was a bit confused about this line. "would see her son holding their son". Did you mean would see her soon holding their son? as that would make a lot more sense. :) You have to love spellcheck, if only it could read your mind. lol

Aww! Nearly, nearly! She's so close, gahh! Lovely chapter (as ever) OoooOoo! Keep it up!

Generally I prefer book version over movie version with the exception of that I like Saruman and Grima meeting their ends at Isengard so that they do not terrorize the Shire. :)

Nice chapter! I'm looking forward to Nariel arriving in Minas Tirith! Should be interesting to see how she reacts to big bad Denethor! The flash back is very sweet :)

I've had a lot of reading to do to catch up and I think you've done a great job. Good work:)

OH! Yay! I did wonder what you would do now! I love this change in plot, it's perfect! But sadness for her leaving Legolas. This way she's still in the action but is (kinda) safe for the birth! I anticipate much drama! And I've read them all! Omg! Now I actually have to wait for a new chapter pah! Keep it up! Can't wait! Actually can't, been a long time since I've felt that way!

Oh! I haven't read this chapter! Woo! I've caught up with myself (by the way, didn't say in my last review, thank you for the reply. I understand what you mean, it would be difficult to include much more and still make the story about Nariel. I like that she's a little rough and the way Nariel approaches her so bluntly gives their connection something really special, I like that, it makes them more friends and allies :D I don't think I've read those two stories, I've seen them on your profile but sort of put them to the side for now, maybe once I've read the rest of NTR and Athrana I'll check them out :) none of us can help promoting, I'd do so myself but my LotR story (well, all of them) are on hiatus and I'd feel guilty (Lomelen if you wanna know ;) haha) Glad you like my reviews, I like to review stories that deserve it!)

Aww I love this chapter, it's brilliant how they manage to inspire each other and see the important things. I like seeing our two little heroins bonding :D

aww! finally