The ending! &hearts so sweet :D

Yay, I think I liked Molly with Michael the best, too. She could straighten his arseholeness out 'cause she has such an equally strong personality.

:D

I was on the edge of my seat wondering whether or not he was gonna take her back. He was hurt just like Theo was so I wasn't sure what he was going to decide. I was really happy at the end, though. I think Michael matured a bit in this, too, because he learned how to swallow his enormous pride! Great work!

"Though Michael was

too proud,

his chest

hurttwingedached when he saw that

stubborn witch with her blurrytooblurry eyes"

I really loved that part!

-Morghen

Molly's lucky that she ended up with anyone!

I loved this little universe.

And once again I am in awe of your freeverse abilities.

Great job.