|Reviews for Mass Effect Dimensions|
| W.A.R1989 4/9/13 . chapter 17
Please do more this is awesome
| wwefollower 8/17/12 . chapter 16
This is a very good story don't get me wrong, but one thing that has been bothering me about this story for a while now is Shepard. I'd really like to see him get owned by someone, because I'm not sure if he's a Renegade or not but he destroys that one AI before Michael can finish convincing him not to do what he was doing. Michael was so upset at this he even wanted to punch Shepard, but reluctantly gives into Shepard's will and the topic is never brought up again. And I don't know why, but reading Shepard saying "But one man can only do so much" and proceed to practically knock that one guy out somehow really upset me. Especially when I think of other video game characters such as Solid Snake (I know MGS isn't remotely related to this story but when I read that line I thought [for some reason] this would be the moment when Otacon used MG Mk 2 or 3 to electrify and knock Shepard out). I don't know why but something about this Shepard really just makes me want for someone, anyone to just punch him in the face and send him flying across to room somehow. Unless he's a Renegade and he's supposed to be that way, but either way the Shepard in this story really pisses me off, I hope somewhere down the line someone puts him in his place. I really think Michael should start standing up to Shepard more often instead of looking for his approval and stuff like that.
Also does Michael have a pairing? I remember reading about that AI incident back on the Citadel and Tali disapproved of him thinking he's a Geth Sympathizer, whatever happened to that? Does she still dislike him?
Anyways other than Shepard, this is a good story and I look forward to seeing what happens.
| edboy4926 8/15/12 . chapter 16
Nice in adding Marvel and Vision. Thought why is it that Vision nearly always appears in just his head?
| edboy4926 7/12/12 . chapter 15
I wonder how a battle between Emma and Jack would turn out.
And history repeats for Tony, stuck in a place held prisoner with another scientist, only this time he has the chance to save him.
| edboy4926 5/31/12 . chapter 14
| edboy4926 5/6/12 . chapter 13
| Phygmalion 4/28/12 . chapter 13
Ok, this is officially one of my favorite Mass Effect crossovers ever! The whole premise is incredibly interesting, and the different characters here are wonderful! There are a few issues with spelling and grammar, but nothing too horrendous. The last chapter with the Hulk was hilariously awesome - I loved seeing the Hulk in action! And Wolverine in the last chapter proved why he's the best at what he does. Tricking Doom - awesome!
And do I see some set-up for MVP/Liara? I have to say, that's one pairing that I never thought I'd see.
Great job, and looking forward to the next chapter!
| alienyouthct 3/20/12 . chapter 1
You have words that are capitalized when they shouldn't be. You have words that aren't capitalized when they should be. You are missing so many punctuation marks, I find myself wondering if you were getting charged to use them and desperately needed to save money. These things are some of the most fundamental parts of the English language, be it American English or Australian English or RP. How you have managed to write thirty-two stories when you cannot master such basics blows my mind.
| douchiesnacks 3/20/12 . chapter 13
| BlackLotus30 3/12/12 . chapter 12
I have to say that I quite enjoyed what you have written so far, there are a few things that bother me. Like the sex scene was meh for me and not something I wanted to read about. Vision destroyed that I can beleive and since you can alway have him rebuilt and frankly would be a nice thing to explore if Tali repair him since he would be considered an AI and expecially since he does have a wife. Jean Grey dead bah like that ever stopped a vessel of the Phoenix, not even death or the reapers can stop it. As for Thor really him killed by ships from the ME universe? it's kind of laughable In a bad way. Next we have van damme hitting wolverine with iron man gauntlet without the main power source attached to it aka tony stark and I don't know but it seemed to easy for him to work out how iron man suit worked, especially since tony is the power source, the gauntlet on it's own would't even work at all.
Oh and I ADORE YOU for including the hulk poor guy doesn't get much love. :(
teehee as someone mentioned trashing of the ship by galactus, well I think it is the hulk that did that but well the similiratis between Galactus and the Reapers amusing enough that it makes me giggle.
On a funny note the way you wrote van damme I almost beleived it was apocalypse up to no good, until you mentionned his tie with doom alterned self
| Matthew Blackheart 12/16/11 . chapter 10
wonderin if the avengers are gonna get out anytime soon
| He Who See's 12/16/11 . chapter 10
Pardon my french, by is HIS ancestors wore Iron Masks, wouldn't that mae him a DECENDENT of this realities ? Furthermore, unless the Master Chief and the . . get involved in this mess, the mission you're thinking about is UNC, not UNSC.
These gripes aside (along with the odd grammar, and the use of commas instead of periods in some sentences), I like your work.
Do you really have to lay on the gratuitous sex scenes? I mean I know that's pretty much what the Marvel Universe has devolved into now adays (ESPECIALLY the Ultimate Universe), but do you REALLY have to go into such graphic detail? Heck! Not even the Ultimate Universe went to such lengths as this story does in its gratuitous sex scenes!(though than again, being the Ultimate Universe, it wouldn't surprise me if they did). What was the purpose of it? To show Miranda's an annoying ho? (BIG SHOCK THERE!) To show Victor is as messed up as doom (I refer you to my previous parenthesis)? To show subtle interactions and character development (I'll refrain from saying "ha")?
Look...I like your work (definately better than some other crossovers between Triple-A Sci-Fi video-game franchises and comic book Universes that's for sure),...but the problem I'm having with this work is how much it reminds me of Dimensional Assault Team (another fic) with all of the needless and unnecessary and blunt and unsubtle sexual references. For you see, the reasons people like fics like these (or at least the reasons I like fics like these) is because it gives people the oppurtunity to see just how a character from another Universe functions and adapts to being tuck into a different (though mildly similiar) Universe. Things like action, dialog, character development...three of the prime reasons that make stories like these fascinating. That is what draws people in. And that is what you need to focus on in order to set yur work apart from the common (and sometimes uncommon) smut that litters this site like a giant fecal stain on what could potentially be a site of good,decent literary quality (if not down right great). A quality your story stands at the line of at the moment, and could very well sink below if things continue on the above mentioned major complaint maintains its present course..
| He Who See's 10/14/11 . chapter 9
"Its not quite that simple Shepard, Hackett's contacts confirmed that the party they're spying on also sent several ships to the area…seventeen frigates were shot down Shepard, something of unbelievable power lashed out at this group before leaving. That's tells me that there was something on this planet they wanted really badly, once you've found the Professor, go to the uncharted world, investigate the wreckage and find out what Cerberus was after."
-Ohhhh! Please tell me it was Galactus or the Silver Surfer that took out those frigates! Or a lost Skrull or Kree mothership!
| He Who See's 9/13/11 . chapter 8
What happended to Thor? Did he die?
Considering his hammer was once able to contain a galaxy wide explosion, I find Mass Effect based ships taking him out without him at least kicking most of their asses to be funny.
| Toby 9/12/11 . chapter 8
This is Good,But I hope you do a update on the idea of Gundam soon.