Eep, so sad. It sounded just like Yukimi was talking. pretty awesome

Nice story,there needs to be more YukimixYoite. It's a shame it was so short, though. and sad :(. Anyway, I liked it, you captured Yukimi's POV well.

OMG! Nikki! This is sooooo sad! I might cry! It's so good but so sad!

I really enjoyed this. I think that Tchabita A's review was a bit too harsh. I mean this is in the romance category. Your grammar and spelling was actually really good except for some very minor mistakes. Well, I'm off to check some of your other stories! D

Hmm... Well, it si grammatically incorrect to have two periods next to each other. Only a lone period., an ellipsis (...) , or a period next to an ellipsis (...) is allowed.

Well. I never got it at first... Then... YUKIMI'S KISSING YOITE? This thought popped into my head and right now, I am utterly DISGUSTED and REVOLTED. WHY THE HELL DID HE DO THAT? Though I can understand the reasons for his doing so, couldn't he have done something else? Something DIFFERENT?

Right now, I am in panicky OMG! mode...

Well, frankly, I'm PISSED OFF! WHO THE HELL DOES YUKIMI THINK HE IS? IS HE GAY OR SOMETHING? EFFIN' PIECE OF BULLCRAP!

And you know what? Shinra Banshou is spelled with a "u" dumbass! I mean you no offense but this fanfiction, literally made my BLOOD BOIL! . :P