I really like how you have a closeness between Jim and Eliza in this story. It is great interaction and very sweet.

I watched it millions of times and I love this little one-shot I wish they would've put this in the movie :)

Im gonna join the whole ''i just watched this movie last night'' haha

(well i already had watched it before, but a long time ago'' And i have to say i really liked this fic. Its short. Its nice. Good job:)

I just saw S.W.A.T tonight. This was a great one shot, I could totally see it as an extension of the movie. Great job!

i just watched s.w.a.t. yesterday (mostly because of michelle rodriguez, haha ) and i think this is a really good one-shot

so big thanx to you that i could read it!