 Ghostwriter 7/4/06 . chapter 1Very cool. Love it. I remember that scene. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Lunaria Hyperion 2/22/06 . chapter 1This is so sad... |
 nimwen 7/4/04 . chapter 1 Loved it! Beautifully written and great understanding of characters!
Great! |
 myriassterre 1/14/04 . chapter 1Angsty, love it. Good use of quotes and stuff, Keep it up. |
 All Mighty Terrestrial 3/17/02 . chapter 1Wow. The repetition of "Close Your Eyes" really made this piece, gave it the same haunting, lyrical quality of a memory that just won't die. Wonderful job. |
 Lemmy 1/4/02 . chapter 1WOW! |
 UnforgivenChild 1/29/01 . chapter 1OMG! Its so good! I love it... |
 Kim 10/8/00 . chapter 1 Noooo! How terrible. :( |
 Michael 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I was very impressed by the use of the dialogue clips. They helped associate the descriptions more personally with Buffy. My only complaint is that would have been better if the tense had remained constant throughout instead of switch between past and present within the same paragraph. Nicely written. |