| Reviews for Flash Back, Flash Forward |
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Aaron Shadow Knight 8/10/11 . chapter 4I really like you Alyssa Marie and Grace Elizabeth series. I read all your other stories about them. I hope you update this soon. |
hannah4951 5/2/11 . chapter 4I'm sorry to see you've stopped writing this story...I hope you will update sometime :) |
Kima00 2/28/11 . chapter 4Very good story enjoyed every chapter. Hope you update soon. |
gaben 1/8/11 . chapter 4I like the fact that you're bring back the case. The photo and Gracie 's drawing has me puzzled. , though I have a bit if a notion. Do we get some flashback to Gracies snow adventure, repercussions, it obviously didn't work out too well if she was in the corner. |
Lajoci 1/8/11 . chapter 4Good chapter. Love how Gracie "borrowed" Alyssa'a make-up! You should be proud of all you personally accomplish. |
IrishDipstick 1/8/11 . chapter 4Awwww! Poor Grace. He drawing was a bit freaky though. Great chapter - I'm just waiting for my mind to be blown :) oh and I know it was still Friday - I checked :/ |
sarahbeara07 1/8/11 . chapter 4Hiya,hope you had a good christmas and new year. Oh wonder what's wrong with Lyssa? I'm curious to find out! Poor Gracie wanting to be big...life is so much easier when your a kid tho! Can just picture Gracie with all mad make up on her face! Lets hope Gibbs doesn't regret letting Lyssa go undercover...suppose need to stay tuned and find out! Great cahpter as always. |
Kat A. Fonell 1/7/11 . chapter 4love it continue |
pjrybicki 1/7/11 . chapter 4really good chapter sitting on pins and needles for the next. |
IMSLES 1/7/11 . chapter 4hmmm... Gibbs wants her to go undercover. That's putting a lot of faith in her. Sue |
IrishDipstick 12/21/10 . chapter 3Ha! Gibbs having to deal with six frozen crying little girls is not going to be good. As for the driving lesson - I can see it turning out like the one and only lesson I had with my dad ;) great chapter! |
sarahbeara07 12/20/10 . chapter 3Great chapter once again,I love Gracie,so determined to do what she wants,Gibbs will not be happy to find the girls outside! Gracie prob won't be happy when Gibbs catches her! I can think of loads of mischief that Grace and Tony could get up to! If you do decide to go with that idea and u need ideas,I have a few! I could see Gracie wanting to be like Ziva/Abby,she's already like Jenny...bossing Gibbs! Love the flash back/forward bits of the story,your a fab writer. Have a great christmas,hope santa's good to you. Oh which gives me idea,prob a bit late now seen as santa comes in 5 days,but would have been a idea to have Gracie catching Gibbs putting out the xmas prezzies and having to explain to Gracie about santa! |
EpicSwaging 12/20/10 . chapter 3Well that would kinda be a problem XD one: kate's dead two: so is Jenny three: Ziva's in I think u can do the one-shot thing, but atleast after I doonu s.6 atleast. And i still wanna see more about Lyssas background, how she became who she is today. And i really wanna know why and how Grace became sutch a bitch. (sry) I mean, lyssa is a normal teenager, wanna do stuff she can't but here Grace is just a bitch in my eyes. Keep writning! Can't wait to read mroe! btw: do the cover thing really funny and good, like she is traped, got in to a gunfight. Maybe her father was a marin sniper, as Gibbs and she know how to handle a bravo51 or M15 and that stuff Xd btw again Xd i had decide to write the Miley DiNozzo story like I told ya :) Update really soon :) /O. |
Kat A. Fonell 12/19/10 . chapter 3love it continue |
Meilea2010 12/19/10 . chapter 3Yea, I can see Kate and Allysa best friends. Driiving Gibbs and Tony crazy. Fantastic story and chapter. When do we get the next chapter. That Gracie is one sneaky little girl. |