 Lily 5/1/11 . chapter 1 I'm depressed but also confused. How the hell did Logan manage to kill himself off? I mean, you'd think that since he's from, like, practically the Civil War he would've found a way to off himself BEFORE he met the OBVIOUS love of his life, Marie/Rogue/my-role-model.
I liked how you incorporated the song at the end. Very nice. And how you changed the ending. I never liked that part of the song. "Love hurts/Love scars/Love wounds/And mars..." I was always wondering, "mars"? You put "mars" into that song? What the hell FOR? It didn't go with the message of the song at all! I mean, I know what "mars" means (aka hurt) but it just kinda repeated itself with a synonym! I hated that!
Anyway, very nice. Very sad, very depressing...but nice. |