This is great! Thank you for posting it. I could have gone on reading for hundreds of pages. You write very well! It went right along with the show.

I loved this story. I have to say I didn't see the ending comming, thou I should have. Good job.

That would be good as a extended episode to finalize the season and the story. Wonder if that's what the writers had in mind when they wrote the episodes.

Good work, that's one good ending. Still want them to conclude it though! Fox sucks!

I liked this series and the character of John Doe. I was sorry it wasn't continued. Dominic Purcell was excellent.

Interesting epilogue to the storyline. You gave John a backstory and a family. Nice job.