are you stupid? or maybe just mentally challenged?
a cleft palate is a disease of the upper lip, definitely not "a rare bone disease".
please at least google stuff before assuming it. .
oh, and i don't think layla is very... um... egyptian? O.O
oh and the sentence "he was riding and his something?"
great grammar usage there... not.

Please update soon I really enjoy your story

More please

Will there be more? O.o it's good so far but there are some spelling errors. Other than that its good :) I hope it's not done tho

Wow that's really cool! I'm a big fan of Egyptian Mythology (mostly Anubis) and of course I'm a full-fledged Christian (don't judge me) and plan on being an Archaeologist/Geologist when I grow up. And I have a question, is this the end of the story? If not...ADD MORE PLEASE!

Your Anubis Lover,

Kairi .

I LOOOOOVE IT! Please update soon!

- Alice 3

Don't pay attention to what those mean people say! This story is going to rock and they know it! Keep writing, if they don't like it they don't have to read it now I'm going to check this story this weekend and it better be updated! If not I'm going to be crying all weekend! ;)

I dont like this story at all. There is a grammar mistake on word 67

Have a nice abuse free day.

This is really good! Please continue this! xxx

This is very good, it's just a bit rushed & it's also choppy. The chapter break-points are awkward. But, never ever ever give up on this story. I love it. :}

Woo hoo! You updated love the chapter, your chapter kinda reminds me of hinata from naruto

OOO This is getting really good. Can't wait for more. Love the historical facts.

write some more

This is going to rock! tell me you're writing more?

wow u really take the reader into the moment its an amzing story so far cant wait to read more!