Wow. That was really intriguing (in a good way of course). The ending was unexpected and depressing but beautiful in a cruel way. Nice work :3

Wow. Kinda left me speechless. Perfect threesome.

Wow, I so didn't see that ending coming, but my god was it completely amazing, extremely well-written and hotter than hell itself! Great job 3

The end of this story made me cry. I hated how Remus and Fred died its not okay! I threw the book after reading it. Poor George, everyone knows he cant live with out his brother, and having Remus die too, thats got to be horrible.

but-but-but- NOOOOO! thats just so sad! D''':

Aww... I cried at the end. :'( so amazing!

Very well written. I'm still crying. Fred dying is one of the worst things that could happen in the series I'd say.

:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( I cried. And cried. And cried... and then cried some more. and then pressed the review button. that was fricking SAD! but also beautifully written, you can tell you really looked into the psychology of all of it. I just keep on thinkin about what I would have thought of it had I not read that last paragraphy bit - and I really think that that was possibly what made the the thing so amazing! It was so moving and emotional and gah. my words just cannot describe well enough how totally amazing this was!

Wow this is amazing. I luv the ending it gives a more personal and real affect to the story if that makes sense. Ur a wonder writing and I hope u go far. Remember grammar and punctuation and maybe work on vocabulary find some more words to make the story more enticing and descriptive if not personal to some of ur readers. And like I said luv the ending I'm one who can relate to his feelings some what and it means a lot that someone would really try to understand what really goes on in ones head when suicide is involved.

Dammit why'd you have to go and ruin it with that ending? I was so happy wIth the first ending, then you made it all sad and depressing. :(

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Still hot though :)

This was sexy, beautiful, sad; everything a good story should be. I absolutely loved it.

So sad! D:

Don't know why I cried, but... ]

I loved your story, though the ending was so sad. I think it's a good thing that they might be together again, in heaven or may in another life. There couldn't have been a better ending. You did an amazing job and I wanted to ask you if I might could translate the story into german? I'd love to, but I understand if you don't want me to. I'd write your name on top and I'd paste the link to this original story, so everyone would see it's from you.

take care,

rushOfAdrenalin:)

Wonderful, great short.

This was so intense, so hott in a very wrong/awesome way. Haha. I loved it, really. The ending was so sad, but believable. It is so hard to imagine George would just move on after Fred died.

Fantastic ]