Like the way you would all the plot lines back together in time for the holiday party. Especially like Gracie's contributions. Kids always add a new flavor and remind us how to keep things simple.

YAHOO! They finally talked. Great chapter. It only gets better from here. Update soon.

I loved this chapter. I'm still waiting with baited breath for Clint and Nancy to talk, but otherwise it was great. It may even inspire me to put my Doc story down on paper and then upload it. Update soon. :)

Great chapter. Can't wait for an update. I love how long this story is so far. :)

Nice story. Like how you worked the friendship angle with Nancy and Clint and the gradual communication. Looking forward to your next chapters !

I'm really enjoying your story and I'm looking forward to reading more.

felicity18

Hello again Zeilfanaat, I like your latest story. You set up a nice cliff hanger for us, which is slightly mean unless you post another chapter soon ! Hope that you're feeling better soon and get over your bug.