 mizukimarr910 2006-06-06 . chapter 7ah not fair i want more please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910 |
 Lahz 2005-09-02 . chapter 1I dont think it's cow-feed...
WHE *tries to hug you but falls off a cliff cause she hugged a bungie jumper and let go* |
 Kira 2005-03-02 . chapter 5 *whimper* Oh gods, I can't read anymore. Please stick to the language you know, pleasepleaseplease. You're good at English. Stay with it. To point out only one of many, many bad bits of Japanese, nobody in WK uses 'iie', it's formal!feminine and really cumbersome. It makes Ken sound like a schoolgirl and Aya sound like an office lady. *sob* |
 Kira 2005-03-02 . chapter 3 Oh dear. Please, please don't attempt Japanese. It makes those of us who actually know how Aya and Ken speak very, very sad.
Hint: pigs would sooner fly than Aya would use '-desu' form of ANYTHING. Least of all to Ken. |
 Betrayal 2003-03-03 . chapter 4ith tho mushy! *huggles ken and aya* i love it!! especially the pairings! |
 Betrayal 2003-02-11 . chapter 1very good! i can't believe i didn't see this story before! *hits herself across the head* |
 Sephykoi 2003-01-19 . chapter 6I'm reviewing here since the stupid thing won't let me review twice in one chapter-i knew that that'll b the outcome-_-;;
On behalf of reviewing on the last chapter: Were's the rest?
lol..
-_-;;;
I wanna see more of this ficcy!!!!
*begs on hands and knees*
-Melle |
 Sephykoi 2003-01-11 . chapter 7GREAT!
Do a sequel please!!!
*begs*
Keep up the wonderful ficcies!
-Melle^_^ |
 V-chan(too lazy to sign in) 2002-12-04 . chapter 7 Wai! I loved it! It was so much more fun to read your fic then do homework! It' was so cute, you should definatley write a sequel, I'll definatley be reading it! |
 Erfaciel 2002-05-05 . chapter 7 Even if you don't have an ending for this story, It's still one of my favs! As for that sequel question...hm, I think that you should write another chapter that has a final decision on the 'what do we call each other?' thing, and then write a sequel! But that's just what I would do, so.......bonne chance! |
 Melrose Stormhaven 2002-05-02 . chapter 7everyone seems to be clamoring for a lemon ending so...i'll go for a lemon. Nice fic, by the way. I'm not exactly a yaoi Weiss fan but I love it!
Aya- kun, I want you, I want you!!! |
 connie 2002-05-02 . chapter 7 *sniff* that was perdyful. just one bit of constructive stuff - ken was sick in the beginning, and...the details of him getting better really faded into the background. and that really was an important basis for why there even *was* ayaxken in da fic, so maybe next time flesh out the details of kenken's recuperation more. that's all, good job tomo-d! ^_^ i await your lemony lemony sequel. |
 Shaynie 2002-05-01 . chapter 7Non, je ne veux pas!!! *ahem*
I actually don't really know. Poor Chibi... had to *share* the shower. |
 Bob? 2002-04-30 . chapter 1 Ooh, lovely ^_^ The whole story was very nice~... end it with a lemon. >:D ::gets killed:: ... oho...maybe for a sequel, go into detail about what happened between Yohji and Omi? ^_~ I'm curious to know what went on in the shower... And maybe it's just me, but the random bits of Japanese in the sentance seem really out of place... ^^; Ehe, that's all. Good job! XD |
 Annie 2002-04-30 . chapter 7 If you have a sequel planned, it would be nice. |