I LOVE this oneshot.

Honestly though, I have a HUGE problem with the Christian doctrine for forbidding people who love each other from being together.

Although others might look at me as crazy for liking stories about this pairing I have say your stories make it worth it. As I said before, stories about Peter/Susan contain an element of tragedy to them. You capture that tragedy perfectly. IMO, you are one of the best if not the best writer on these two I've seen so far. Best of luck.