This was a wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Please write more, and sooN!

Touching and a wonderful story

Ok I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff hehe. I think you did a good job. I'm a huge yaoi fan but I also really enjoy fics like this, because I can see things really being that way as opposed to fairly un-canon yaoi. I hope to hear more from these two talented writers.

-Maria

OMG! I am so touched with how you wrote this is fic. The friendship, the care OMG! I love this! I think I'll add to my faves just because, if chaos lets me, but i'll do it anyways. keep wriiting Cosmos

Wow, this was great! Please write more, this story was amazeing. -

Very nice, very IC. Particularly nice were the descriptions of Aya and Yohji's thoughts on being the only real adult. I love yaoi, but it doesn't have to be in everything, and this is really truer to the actual material. In fact, it would have made an excellent episode for the show, although only narrative can give us these sort of insights into characters' thoughts and feelings.

my god talk about a sugar overload. X told me it was bad but geeze. I really enjoyed the smarm _

they finally hug! err anyways, love you guys -m

Wow. This was just great. It was absolutely perfect. I totally loved. Please continue soon with more! Great job!

0o holy! That was an extreamly well writien and thought out piece of work! I adore it! keep going with your writing and who knows where it may take you! V