I cracked up at this line: "I make invading look gooood." hehehe... imagining Zim actually say that is pretty funny. Lmao, I guess I'm just giddy tonight _ Gir's response was even funnier. And the next part... that was SO CUTE! Zim enrolled Gir in Pre-school? 'Special'... hehe. I love all the little elements you add into your story, it really marks your work as above a lot of what we usually see here around FFN. ::snickers:: "Illegal aliens"... ; I can't really think of a title to suggest now, I'd have to know more of the plot. How about using a quote? Or the name of a song that might be sort of like the story? (Like, 'Day By Day' or 'Teach Me To Stop Loving Him', arg, I don't know! Do you know how difficult it is to come up with titles?) Anyway, that's a wonderful start. My, we're on a roll here, aren't we? Nothing really to criticize about your story 'cept the spelling... sujest is supposed to be 'suggest'. Other than that everything else seems to be done pretty damn well. Impatiently awaiting your next chapter!

ooo, neatness. Please get the next chapter up soon, or I shall have to send Tica to visit you. 9.9 Ooo! I'm gonna get a new friend! I had an old one named polly parrot but after we played piniata (did I say that right?) he kinda stopped moving...