Score: The seagulls attack tonight.

Squall? Anyway, I liked the peice, but are you ever going to use that spell theory in a whole fic? (ignore me if you already have.)

Good story, though confusing. I like that it was set in Ultimecia's time. I'm confused as to who the bones where of. It couldn't be Squall because he didn't die on Centra and neither did Seifer. Utterly confused, yet again.

Aw man, this is sweet magi. I don't quite understand it though. -_- Ah well, good nonetheless! write on!

Inteesting take on Griever. Scratch that, VERY interesting take on Griever. And setting the fic in Ultimecia's time just added to the surreal tone of the situation. I too grieve for the man who died there. Call me a sentimental softy. :)

I like your theory of Griever's origin, and the idea of stronger magic in the future. Original and interesting.

Original and, well, stunning. Please treat us to some more of you short works.

_ my first instinct is to say Seifer, but who knows... REALLY GOOD! *laughs* I like stories that don't have everything lined out...