Love it! I like the way you wrote David's feelings about this relationship, his inner debate as he struggles to come out and the fact he actually cares about Jennifer. Really sad, but absolutely well written.

This story is wonderful. I've always wanted to see more of David's POV regarding his faux-mance with Jennifer and how he struggled with it.

What a lovely, sad story. You've captured David's wish to please very well. Thanks for sharing.

Nice story!