This is a terrific story, with an intense emotional center. I hope that even after a year, you can find your way back here again.

A few things:

1."She was a sight, standing there in shorts and a bra only..." I few moments later she walks out of the building. Is she still dressed this way? Even as upset as she was, I think she would throw on a t-shirt.

2."He noted with some interest that she didn't shave away her pubic hair, the way he was used to seeing." I'm from Remus' generation, and it was not at all common for women to shave there in the 1970s and 1980s. I checked with my friends from England and they remember it as well-although I am not in any position to Brit-pick you. "Shaving" was something that caught on in the late 1990s and 2000s-think Sex and the City. Of course, things could be different in the wizarding world-that's your call. But if wizard's and muggles follow similar trends, then it's more likely that Remus would be surprised that Dora shaved, than the other way around.

doesn't he need a spell for the third "jump" when he needed one for the first and second?

4. Your Minerva is wonderful-all proper on the surface but a very good friend.

Even if you never finish this, thanks for the story so far.

Remus has fallen down the rabbit hole! Curiouser and curiouser.

I've really enjoyed this story so far and was just wondering if it's worth holding out any hope for future updates. I hope so, it would be good to see this concluded :)

I see in your profile that this fic is depressing you. It's depressing me too. I beg you to update.

I LOVE this story and keep checking for updates! I hope that you are doing okay, and I hope there is an update soon. Remember that there are readers out here anxiously awaiting an update!

I really, truly love this! The only thing that I didn't like about this chapter is Lily's supposed three-month pregnancy. I know it's such a minor thing, but it's really bugging me.

Lily can't have been pregnant when she died. She wouldn't have given up herself for Harry if she had, because by giving herself up for her child, she's giving up her other child for him, also.

Let me guess: 5 are the 5 times he's going to travel thorugh time. And if I'm right... there will be still 3 more chapters, YAY! Erm... ofrget that I said that, I don't want to put extra pressure on you.

And D... for Dora? Just because putting there a N or a T would be too obvious?

I digress, nevermind.

Cheers!

I REALLY TRULLY DESPERATELLY hope you've not giving up on this story. It's so amazing! And it's rare to find a story around here you don't know how is it going to end so that doubles me liking this.

I bet you read this often but please please update soon!

This is a truly great Remus/Tonks fic and even more uncommon, a fresh and believable time travel fic. I hadn't thought pulling Remus forward in time would work out quite as well as sending Tonks back but your characterization is so beautiful and original I was quickly won over.

I just stumbled upon this story and I really hope you'll continue it one day. Thanks for the great read.

Excelent. I really live this. It kind of reminds me of the time travellers wife. Please update soon ;)

I just found this story after somehow stumbling onto Harry Potter and the Editor's Revenge, and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. Where is Remus's next location? I'm guessing that he will end up in 5 different time zones with Dora, so it should be exciting! Will he meet Harry? Will he meet future him? I can't wait to find out!

I think your scene's were very tastefully written. I agree, far too often in stories, it seems like everyone magically just fits together and knows what to do and has the best sex ever the first time they are together. If that truly happened to someone, I am jealous, because first times are usually really awkward!

And I love that you are also a LAT fan. I managed to find your work from your name on Jules' blog! I know you aren't for self promotion, but I love finding new, good work, and anyone who loves Jules' work must be able to recognize good writing, and it really shows in your work. I can't wait for you to post more :)

Please tell me you're writing more!

It'a a great story, good AUness without dispatching with characterisation. Can't wait to see what happens next.

This is a really great story. Remus and Tonks are my faves, and I've rarely read a fic in which they are accurately portrayed at a young age. You have succeeded.

I'm aching to see what comes next.

And I do hope this story is not on hiatus... it's just great!

Cheers!

Hi. I've read and reviewed this story before and I do love it. Also, I was wondering if you plan to continue it at all. I'm asking because it's such a lovely story with a great plot and it'd be a shame if you just abandoned it. That being said, I realize not all people are constantly on FF like me and you may be busy. Just letting you know that when you do decide to update, you'll have a very eager reader. Thanks.

love the story so far. hope you continue