this awesome! please continue!

Great story I really liked it.

For the very ending, dude, I have to ask.. if there was a fountain of youth, is Cologne young and a mother as well?

Kasumi turned a little green as the screaming and pleading turned frantic. She couldn't seem to blink as the scene continued with the boy getting gouged and scratched in the restless and hungry dark. After a few moments, Kasumi managed a very weak "Oh my."

[Sounds like an apt response to watching the nekoken training]

(One of these actually has Ranma learning the dreaded nikkou ken and is a cheerful happy person.)

[I have no idea how that could come to pass, though the fact that it only gets one sentence indicates that it must not be funny enough to seriously exploit]

In one he actually learns the Cat Fist and ends up relatively content, but that's very unusual.

[I wonder if anybody’s actually done a fanfic on that]

After a few moments the smile faded from Genma's face. No scream of anguish. No howling from the cats. No shrieking from his son. How odd.

[The final sentence really puts the comic punch in]

what that baka father

[I felt this was unnecessary Japanese]

would keep push

[pushing]

"You caught me and then we snuck off and mastered the technique."

"Damn straight.

[Oddly amusing]

Given a pair of tonfa, hanbo, or gunsen -

[The other two make sense, but isn’t the hanbo pretty universally single-use? It _is_ the Eastern equivalent of the quarterstaff, though I suppose it’s still a possibility. I just wouldn’t think Nabiki would be using weapons anyway because her greatest ‘muscle’ is her brain. I also felt that this scene was extremely strange given that it implies the Tendo daughters are staying with Nodoka, when they live in Nerima. It’s not like they’ve left the Tendo family]

Ranma found out what occurred

[Ranma, or Mousse?]

and even then she was being trained by Mrs Saotome

[And not Soun why?]

to their iinazuke than

[Unnecessary Japanese]

something a Japanese took lightly

[the Japanese?]

and stood nearly 6'2" -towering over most of those present.

[‘towering’ to say the least]

as her iinazuke.

[Unnecessary Japanese]

"And I'm the Masaki Sister, I'm the Cute One." Ukyou chimed in a half beat later.

[Not quite the Warner Brothers Sister, but comes across anyway]

and reacted with dignity and quiet reserve.

"WAH! AT LAST OUR HOUSES CAN BE JOINED!"

[That’s Soun]

I'm sure he's Dark Kingdom somehow!

[Aren’t the crossovers getting rather excessive by now?]

Nabiki readied her ton-fa nightsticks.

[Tonfa resemble nightsticks but are not quite the same (unless you want to consider ‘tonfa’ a family of weapons with ‘nightsticks’ a subset thereof, which still isn’t the same)]

The Demon Dad, Genma Saotome.

[Did I mention that this ceased to be funny long ago? It has]

prone to rages that would get her the next cell to Kodachi.

[I’d have thought that violent outbursts like that would have her put behind iron bars, while Kodachi lives behind padding]

"Because, child, this island is not only a physical island, but an island in the stream of time and space. Literally anything could wash up on these shores."

"There must be 10,0 socks here!"

[Okay, that’s funny]

Pity that you stopped writing, this is good work. A little odd in places, particularly the end ‘bonus story’, but funny nonetheless.

Okay. ciao

This one is also pretty bad. Everything that was good and interesting was removed and replaced by random crap. What is worse, it is another one of those "this god/gods decide to help out" kind of fanfics. If Gods really cared enough to bother with humans why would they help Ranma? Far more likely they would have found Genma's antics amusing (since living forever makes you pretty bored no?) so they would have helped Genma in his endeavours... not Ranma.

Nice idea, great build up. Slow changes with great details making them believable as possible. I suppose like most the fics around the bet my only real complaint is the ending. After such a long detailed build up it is always a bit sad to see the ending so vague and quick. We are left wondering exactly who is Ranma married to, considering almost every female on the planet and beyond were chasing him by the end of this fic ;)

*foflmao* This is just too too TOO funny!

lmao

loved the kill genma scene

I really liked this story. I thought it was very funny,

especially at the end. KILL GENMA! Keep up the good

work!

very good story you put together

"You *know* you're not supposed to exert yourself like that! Don't you remember what happened when you tried to master the Breaking Point?"

"Yeah," Ranma said slyly. "You caught me and then we snuck off and mastered the technique."

Hehehehehe Great lines as always. Perfect for getting a peak at who the character really is and funny as hell while moving the plot forward.

I love the roadrunner bit between Ranma and Ryoga. Of course if the mob of girls catches him that endurance training is going to come in handy.

"By the Light Of Jurai, WE SHALL PUNISH YOU!"

LOL I love to see them play! They don't seem to get much time to play except in battle and rarely then.

"We'll get to him in a minute. First, who gets the blanket?"

LOL I didn't expect that one.

LOL You really should seperate this into chapters and repost.

Kudos on perhaps the biggest crossover/fusion/Bet entry I've seen so far. Great story, if a bit too many details.

Very funny. I liked the main story and the silly omakes alot. Thank you for writing them.