Hehehehe! I can just imagine Freddie's silly grin! Love the story and I can't wait for more! :D

I love your story! :D It's so sweet and I love the sneaky little addition of a Tenacious D song, very clever :) Please update soon, I started reading this today and got pretty upset when I saw there wasn't any more :(

I love the moment when freddie gazed sleepily at her. Great plot! And i appreciate the cute bits of freddie teasing summer a little. It makes the whole thing more believable. Anyway im hooked to your story, and it would be a great thing if you could update soon. I love the fact that you take count of the little things like the way he stares and notice stuff, cause those stuff are the most fun to read. Like i said i love the 'sleepily gaze' thing. XD keep it up!

Kate :)

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