that was good keep it up

Awesome interpretation of that scene. Well written!

I really like this story, thought it was very true to character. And I LOVE the Poe song choice- I think it the most perfect Damon-Elena song out there and I've never seen anyone use it before! A lot of her songs are great for them actually (like Amazed), but Wild is just perfect. Only complaint is you should have put more of the lyrics!

More verses that I think suit them:

Tell me what you've come for

Moving like a hunter through my back door

Leaving the perfume of all you adore

To die nameless on my floor

Yeah well we both know you don't play fair

I guess you really think that you get me there

Let's be honest perhaps this little ride

is too much for even you to bear

You've got a lot of nerve to come back here

You're not the only one who can smell fear

AMAZING! If I had a 'thud' smiley I would be using it!

Nice work!

Very Nice, it complements the scene very well.

Perfect characterization of this scene! Love your stories. I know that you have limited time but please keep writing in this fandom. I finally signed up on fanfiction (I really hate posting online) so that I could leave a review in the hopes of encouraging you to do just that. It can be difficult to find well-written stories about the Damon/Elena pairing so I really appreciate your talent!

I loveee that line about one day shell die with life written on her face and hands. Beautiful!

Oh wow, written to perfection, love it. :)

But he liked the fire she possessed, the steel core hidden by her soft curves, sweet smiles, and old-soul eyes the color of lovingly aged whiskey.

i'm so in love with this line.

and with this story!

I loved every single word!

oh yes! I was thinking something along the lines of this when I saw that part on the show! I was hoping someone would write it out!

Please post more super super soon!

Nicely done.

"or to keep her with him for all of eternity"

yay. Very cute tag, much appreciated.

I loved this! There was so much sexual tension in that scene, and Elena can deny all she wants, but it must have turned her on ... and of course Damon picked up on that ;)