Cliffhanger! Ooooh I'm so romanced by this story!

I certainly envy how descriptive you are with this. And the part of the Prophet losing his scythe did put a grin on my face.

Who'dve thought I'd actually show anger...

"Alvira?" I... am guessing that is the Queen's name?

This... just got far more interesting... !

This indeed does make me wonder about the Alfador that was.

Very symbolic and foreshadowing. I like it!

Excellent job, and well worth the wait! I can't wait to read more. Good job!

I know that all-praise reviews tend to not help at all, but I haven't found anything wrong with this story. You use great descriptions- not having too little or too much, the characters are developing nicely, and the plot seems great so far. Your words also flow very well. I like your writing style. :D I can't wait for the next update!

I'm so glad you updated! Such a nice chapter!

I read this during class because I couldn't wait to read it at home. I'm glad you didn't rush the chapter. I think it's better short and well written than long and half assed.

Yay! Please update soon :D

Yaaaaaay! An update!

Pretty good, keep it up! :D

Oh wow, this is awesome! Very nicely written. Please continue!

This is my favorite story! I love that when you make Janus and Magus interact, I can still think of parts of the story happening without their actions seeming strange. Your words flow very well and the characters' speech seems normal for their specific personality. Please update as soon as possible!