why did you stop and right at the good part

thats so sad

i cant belive tht she commited sucide thts sad there

this is a very lovely fanfic. I love the InuKag(inuyasha/kagome) pairing. It seems like Kagome took things the wrong way and killed herself. Seeing that Inuyasha was holding her body at the end of the story telling Kagome even though she is dead. "I was only telling her my decision, kobito. I was only telling her goodbye" ur exact words in the story.

I think this is a good story. Although you ruined the ending by switching to Inuyasha's point of view. If you ever write a two part story like this again, I say end it right when after the the thing that makes it a tragedy. Put everything that could give the reader hope into the beginning of the second part. But still a good story.