there were nouthing wron with your storys i happend to like them

very good! you used some stuff from the books so it sounded like Ben- well done

YOU. ARE. AWESOME!

I love this!

Awkwardness is the best way to write a love story.

ADD MORE! UPDATE! PLEASE?

Haha I was laughing so hard whilst reading that! Loved it!

... OMGILOVEIT! !

This was a quick read and I'm grateful for that since I didn't have much time to read it. I thought it was funny and I liked how it was mostly dialogue, so thumbs up!

That was cute. And honestly, the first time he was quite around her and Jason, I was like 'Um, dude, he likes you...stop fawning' lol

I don't think him telling her would go quite like this, but I liked it none the less. )

Hope you post more -

Tori

(Yes, that is my name...or at least the version of it I like. lol It was weird reading something with my name, even if it wasn't spelled the same way. haha) )

I really liked it! nice job. i'v read all the Viral's fanfics so far and i like this one the best. Please continue:)

Love it!

Wow haha awesome story! I really am thinking now... What about Ben? Haha yeah he's all quiet... and this explained his quietness... Yupyup, I seriously liked this! Yeah, really good... I don't know what else to say! You kind of voiced my thoughts with this... Yesh, me loved it :)

I just finished reading viral's nine minutes ago- and as soon as I read this it felt like a continuation of the book! Great job, seriously! This was fabulously amazing, it blew me away.

awesome fic, very cute, a little short but still good. keep writing D

luv this! i know this is a one shot and was posted nearly 3 months ago but PLEASE CONTINUE!

i like it.

I really enjoyed this one shot but i think you should write more like her confrontion with ben out side of ifollow