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poems2songs 2007-07-02 ch 17,	abusewonderful story... i loved it... Heero/Serena is a fave pair of mine... great work... good job!
Crystal Serenity Yuy 2007-06-19 ch 17,	abuse100. I no not one of ur choices but I loved it. Also u rele need 2 add some lemon scenes 2 ur stories. It doesn't have 2 b major just a little bit of lemon would probably work. I've read most of ur stories and I haven't found a one that I didn't like. Sequels 2 some would b nice bcause I feel that I haven't been satisfied w/ the stories. Like this one. Definantly needs a sequel. U leave WAY 2 much 2 the imagination. A little is good but not 2 much. Passing Judgment is an example of that. U left it @ the perfect point 4 imagination. Ur one-shot Awakening was very good. It was the same as Passing Judgment. Last Chances... Not a word that I could use in this 2 describe it. Also Double Standard shouldn't have stopped where it is today. It put a let down on me when I read it. I didn't like it as much as I have enjoyed ur others. Maybe if u revised it and explained even more things in it u could probably catch ur interest back in it. Same thing I'm doing with Triplets Troubles and Loves. I started that my seventh grade year and I'm gonna b a freshman next year. I haven't been able 2 figure out how 2 continue with Chapter 6. Hope this helps u out a little. And think about the sequels. Sometimes they turn out better than their prequel. :-)
serenity77 2005-04-09 ch 17,	abuseLove it! Except when Andrew did what he did. That's so cute how Hiiro said his little speech about not caring about her body but about her smile, laughter, soul, etc. Anyways, I give you an 8! Good job! -serenity77
AnimeSiren 2005-02-15 ch 16,	abuseA-M-A-Z-I-N-G thats all i have to say it was an awesome story.
Silver, Shadow 2004-11-08 ch 16, anon.	abuseu do know Catherine is Trowa's sister right thats just sick no offence if i didnt know they were sibs it would be a great pairing but hey its your choice anyway nice chap though i wish u had Darien-baka and Andrew-baka dead but again your choice
hokuikai 2004-06-03 ch 17, anon.	abusehey vixen, the story is a 10.9! You're a good writer and I hope i could be able to write this much, with this much ideas and everything. My head get's blocked alot every now and then, but look at you. This story's awesome. If i can't rate above 10 then I'll give you a 10. G2G! Laterz!
loneangel77 2004-05-04 ch 17, anon.	abuseI LOVE YOUR STORY! It is so sweet, and Andrew is usually the nice guy. Why did you make him like that? Well, anyways, I rate your story a 1...NOT! I Rate your story a ...not 10...not 50... but 100! Great Job! (=^.^=) -loneangel77
DarkTenshi23 2003-10-25 ch 17,	abuseWow! That was awesome! You are the best writer. I loved it how Hiiro had been having dreaming of Serena that was cool. You did a wonderful job with this. It was just as good as all your other storys. If now better and what a cute ending.
tenshikoneko03 2003-07-10 ch 17,	abuseWow. That's what I'm feeling right now. At first when I started reading this story I didn't want to finish it cause I thought it was going to be boring. But now I'm glad I finished it. You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Hopeful Artimas 2003-06-14 ch 17,	abusevery good Do you always have to leave us hanging? i think that it is very good 10
General Mat 2003-06-06 ch 17,	abuseA 7.
Naa-chan 2003-03-28 ch 17,	abuse10 ALL THE WAY BABY!1 It was awesome! I love it adn your work! Keep going!!
Rosegodess9 2002-10-11 ch 11, anon.	abuseOne other small note is I thought maybe you could have taken a few more minutes to elaborate on when hiiro figured out she was his dream woman. Then again if your going to rush that was definatly the best sentence to use.
Rosegodess9 2002-10-11 ch 10, anon.	abuseI think it's really good excepts for one thing. How can he not make the connection between the two serinities? And I accidentally read some of the next chap and didn't she already say that matt had been one of the danmed? Pretty much the ONLY thing wrong is that you do exactly what I do and don't proof read. Don't worry though, I HATE proofreading so for a while I didn't but I have to now to make sure it flows well and it really does make a difference.
Stary Blonde 2002-10-04 ch 17,	abuseStar-chan: Whoa. Bob: That was good...for a mortal. Star-chan: Why can't you ever just say something nice?! Bob: I did! Star-chan: But then you added "...for a mortal." Bob: Whatever. Just rate her so we can get this over with! Star-chan: Fine. I'd give you an 11 but Bob will just go on about how that means that I don't think you're the best so I'm giving you a 10! Bob: So she's not good enough for an 11? Star-chan: scream I HATE YOU! Bob: Is that so? Well isn't that a coincidence (or however the h3ll it's spelled...evil thing spelling...), I love me. Star-chan: We are leaving before I kill you right here right now. Bob: That I'd like to see. Star-chan: TIME TO LEAVE! It was a great fic! Keep up the great work. to bob NOW YOU! TIME TO GO!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!! Bob: It's just too easy. Bye mortal. ~ Star-chan & Bob

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