This story is great! I really like your characterizations. Keep it up!

Ah! I love this story! And I would love to find out what happens next so, I was wondering if you are planning another chapter?

Well, you are really good at personifying the characters! The fact that I just love Larsa, Penelo and Balthier really helps too!

And this pairing is amazing!

Excellent story!

-Pie!

lovely. haha! My favorite part would be Lasrsa talking to the mirror, and him saying, it's been a long time penelo... your hair is blonde, something like that. lol. PLEASE do update again SOON!

Heya! This story kept me awake last night haha read up to date an then had to sleep. But I have to say I love this story! Everyone has been so in character Balthier made me laugh quite a few times though I am glad he gave her a ride to the palace! Larsa an his practicing conversation amused me 'hair is very... Blonde.' Haha and poor Penelo! What they said to her was very nasty though some people never let go of things, I'm just glad she managed to get to his side! Imagine what he'd have done if she had been jailed! This story is awesome, sorry if this is clumped on phone! *alerts*

GREAT!

I love your story so far. I like the way you carry out Larsa's personality. Your writing is absolutely wonderful.

Love your older Larsa by the way. :D

I will be waiting for the next chapter, and keep up the fantastic work.

Isabelle1981

AWESOME STORY!

THIS. STORY. IS INCREDIBLE! I am in complete awe. :O

I really like your Larsa. I love the way you carry out the characters personalities, it's absolutely amazing.

I love the trailer for 'The Meek Shall Inherit' it's so amazing and freeeeeaking sweet. Laikkuseia always have some great videos. :)

Keep up the GREAT work, and I will be waiting for the next chapter. :DDDDD

You updated!

AWESOME!

(blonde, blue-eyed, approximately 5'4", Rabanastran, twenty-two years of age, indelibly well-proportioned - well, perhaps that last item had not left his lips, but gods, he had been thinking it)

Love it! Update soon please.

This. story. is. incredible.

I am absolutely in -awe- with the way you carry out all the characters' personalities so perfectly. I have been sitting here for basically the last hour, reading and relishing every word of this fic :D It's certainly hard to find an extremely good fanfic to read and indulge in, but I have to say, I'm impressed. Your prose is wonderful, I honestly feel as if I am -there- with Penelo or Larsa, or with Naldy.

Larsa x Penelo forever 3

I am painfully awaiting your next chapter. Keep writing!

Oh...My gosh.

I'm not a fan of fanfics based on video games, but I have to say: I really, really, really like yours!

...Like a lot. I'm supposed to be working on a research paper for my English class, but I couldn't stop reading your story!

I love the plot that you have here. Penelo isn't exactly one of my favorite characters from FFXII, but I think it's because of the same exact problem you illustrated in the beginning of the story with her being restrained by Vaan's more dominant personality and her desire to stick by him no matter what. The story is progressing very smoothly and I like how you've managed to bring in all of the characters.

...Did I mention how much I love your older Larsa? (swoon) XD

Looking forward to reading more! Great work. :)

Ooh, what a well-written fic! I've been trying to find decent Penelo/Larsa fic, and apart from this one I found – what – *one* other fic that was really good. I must say, I really like Larsa's characterization here – the bit where he muses on exactly how similar he might be to Vayne is delicious (as is, needless to say, the interaction between him and Penelo). :D

Putting this on alerts; I can't wait to read more!

This update has made my day.

I'm thoroughly enjoying your dipiction of Larsa. :]

You write him so aristocratically while still sounding human. It's beautiful, really.

Keep it up! X3

Thank you so much for updating! I watched the trailer for TMSI, I's awesome. Update soon please.

Please please please update soon!

Ah! Exciting chapter; I loved the chase scene. Can't wait to see more of Larsa next time!

JLuna

I would love to see Larsa's face when he realized it was Penelo, and you just had to end the chapter there didn't you. :D anyway, I hope you update soon.

jesswilliams